Transmigrated to Another World: Has My Divine Son's Persona Cracked?

I'd like to say hi first. This is my first time officially writing a novel, so I'm a little nervous. I spent an hour and a half cramming on the history of Inazuma for some later plot points (of course, I can't guarantee it's very accurate, plus it's a semi-fictional world). Besides that, I wanted to build the plot on the main storyline while also adding some innovation.

Well, the pacing of this book is decent overall. However, I personally don't really like this kind of pseudo-harem. Now that it's been reset, I feel like all the other female characters described before were wasted (unless it's restored later and everyone is added). It also hints at who the female lead is.

It was very good, but I finished watching it very quickly.

To be honest, I can't give it five stars yet, because sometimes the author doesn't use punctuation. What are clearly two connected sentences are turned into one, and it takes a long time to read them separately to understand them. It's incredibly frustrating. Don't question me, I've been reading for longer than you all.

I really like this book.

A Heartfelt Zen Novel: More annoying than the random harem-building is the flirting without commitment, which seems irresponsible. Overall, it's a pretty good read, but the pacing isn't great; some parts are noticeably chaotic. However, some small details are handled very well. I hope the author continues to improve. I came across this book based on recommendations. It's really good!!!

This book is great! 🥰 I really love it and as a loyal fan of the author, I highly recommend it.

It's good, but the problem is, author, how could you be so lazy? 😫😫

It feels rather strange, for example, that even a general can read minds? The idea of ​​a divine child is more believable. I still quite like this book 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰

I really like this book, I don't know why so few people read it. I just hope it won't be abandoned or have a bad ending. Good luck to the author!