Harry Potter: I Make Chocolate at Hogwarts

Do you know the author? When I first read your profile, I thought it was about the love between two girls. It wasn't until I read more than 20 chapters that I discovered that what you meant by "two heroines" was two protagonists and two pairs of partners... Your introduction directly said that two protagonists are better. Wouldn't two pairs of partners be better? (｡•́•̀｡)

It's super nice ♥(｡￫v￩｡)♥, but I hope the author can do more Yuesi CP. I'm a huge fan of him, ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc), by the way, I'd like to urge you to update more (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

It's okay, I just hope Wei can do more than fall in love

Personally, I like Xiao Yuan better, but I feel that there are too few scenes. If possible, can you delete some of Violet's scenes (no malice)? Violet feels like she has been falling in love with Malfoy. Although Xiao Yuan's plot is small, the character creation is great, and the interaction with Sri Lanka is also very good. It's smooth, but there's still a problem. Xiao Yuan's plot is really short. Can the plot split between the two heroines be split 50-50? [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Let me whisper again: Is the author a little biased towards Violet? [Grieved] [Grieved]

I thought it was the end, but it turned out to be a break! What to do! I've seen a lot of them! But it's quite good-looking. Malfoy is a arrogant little boy who falls in love with the heroine at first sight. Hehe, he's so sweet. Si Jiao and Kite are also Orcs.

It's super good-looking. I'm really looking forward to the relationship between the professor and Xiao Yuan [laughing][laughing]

The setting is great! But madam, we can't see the picture here, we can only see the code. Can you put the picture in the comment area?

It's pretty good-looking, but of the two heroines, I prefer Xiao Yuan [Admiration] Although it is a dual heroine, I always feel that Vivi has more plot. It feels like her and Draco's love is like a separate cookie. Every time I see her and Draco's cookies, I just skip them and just want to see Yuan's. And I feel that the author is more like a mother to Vivi. If Vivi's plot is really necessary, then Xiao Yuan and Si Jiao will be turned into deputy CPs, and V will be the sole heroine, because I always feel that I prefer V to Xiao Yuan. I feel that V is a cookie, and Xiao Yuan is also the kind of story that I don't know how to describe. Anyway, I personally like Xiao Yuan better. In fact, I think these two heroines can be separated, and each can be written into a separate article. (This is just my personal opinion, and I don't mean to criticize the author. Don't criticize me, I am right.)

It's good to read. This is one of the many Harry Potter fanfics I've read, and it's quite good. Although the author's current rating for this book is not very high, the score is improving little by little. I hope the author will work hard.

The text is very interesting, but it would be nice if there were more content about Xiao Yuan and Si Jiao. Vivi has a lot of space and descriptions. She is obviously a double heroine, but Xiao Yuan looks miserable in comparison.