(Ron and Luna knowing each other since childhood may be out of character.)
On the stage of a completely reimagined Hogwarts,
Ron, an unremarkable-looking boy, unexpectedly gains the strange ability to glimpse the future.
From that moment on, the wheels of fate spin wildly, and the course of his life veers entirely off track.
This is the age of Harry Potter, the celebrated Boy Who Lived, whose brilliance shines across the wizarding world.
But who could have guessed that, in the shadows where hope and darkness intertwine, a red-haired Ron from Slytherin would quietly rise, destined to become the fearsome third Dark Lord and unleash a new storm upon the wizarding world?
A wizard wielding the mysterious power of fate, he seems born to rewrite destiny and rule the wizarding world, destined to play the grandest, most stirring movement in this epic symphony of magic and fate.
Yet at this moment, eleven-year-old Ron is wrestling with an extremely "difficult" problem: should he devour two chicken drumsticks, boldly go for three, or pair them with two delicious chicken sausages for the perfect meal...?
The curtain slowly rises on a legend that will shake the wizarding world. The epic documentary The Wizard of Fate at Hogwarts: The Tale of Red-Haired Ron invites you to join this magical journey, filled with wonders, thrills, and fun.
It's nice, but too little. In basically all fan fiction in the past, Ron was a supporting character used to set off the protagonist, and many novels focused on describing his shortcomings. But in this book, although it seems that the author gave Ron the golden finger as a prophet, I think it actually gave him the perseverance to persist in learning. Ron has shortcomings in the original work. He is usually timid, vain, and jealous... But he never lacks the courage to sacrifice for others. Just imagine, there are 7 children in the family, but I live like an invisible person. Which child would not have the above shortcomings? Even Harry, the protagonist of the original work, isn't he vain? Even when Ron was elected prefect, he also had a stiff face, did Hermione even notice it? It's just that Ron in the original book couldn't keep studying, couldn't be a good character, and didn't have more shining points for people to ignore his shortcomings. But for a person who can drop out of school to accompany his friends through life and death and live in exile in an environment where adults in the wizarding world shrink back, even if he shrinks midway, even if he is not as smart as Hermione, I feel that I can't ask for more. In this novel, after the author gave him the power of prophecy, Ron bravely took a step forward in order to change the fate of his family. He is still looking forward to the future story. I hope the author doesn't want to create a harem or make Ron a brainless strongman. Although it can be read, generally speaking, Harry fandom is all about the surprise of seeing magic for the first time as a child. With a harem or a brainless strongman, there will be some sensory drama. After all, no one can fool themselves. The female characters in the story fall in love with someone at the same time... It always feels like YY, rather than a new adventure triggered by the change of the protagonist.
The book has potential, but I hope the part where Luna changes clothes can be changed. Although I understand the restlessness of adolescent boys, it is still too obscene and makes me feel psychologically uncomfortable.
Although not many people have read it, it is really well written. 1. This article is based on Ms. Rowling's original text. The characters are unbiased and very comfortable to read. This is very valuable in HP. Many authors have derogated Dumbledore, Harry, especially Ron, and praised the Dursleys, the people of the Snake House, and especially Snape. This is very unfriendly to fans of Harry, the principal, Ron, etc. Who have read the original work and are relatively neutral. They also refuse to discuss and draw a line. 2. I have read about 40 chapters, and I have hardly seen any bad jokes. This is very rare in the entire online literature circle. In my personal opinion, except for Hannah Abbott's "Iron Hat King" meme, other memes in the HP circle are relatively bad, especially the "Hermione and her two useless men" meme. After watching Red Temperature once, I even wonder if these people have never seen the original movie and started talking nonsense after reading a few fan novels. 3. The protagonist has a spirit of kindness, friendliness, and self-sacrifice, which is extremely valuable. Blind compromise and weakness are certainly not in line with the simple values of the people, but killing innocent people indiscriminately, being insensitive and showing no compassion is worse than a pig or a dog. As Principal Dumbledore said, "Love is the greatest magic." Love is Harry Potter's greatest quality and the core spirit of this set of books.
The author allowed me to see a different Ron, or let me understand a side of Ron that I didn't know about. The delicate psychological description fully expresses Ron's complex mental state, allowing me to better understand what this character is thinking. I really like the author's writing style. I clearly feel that it is different and unique. I hope the author can stick to it. ~(^з^)-☆❤ I resonated emotionally with the main character. I was Ron when I was reading it, so I felt the same way. There were many times when I cried while reading it😭. I almost cried while reading it. I really feel heartbroken and aggrieved for this character (ⅈ▱ⅈ), especially in his interactions with the Weasley family. The author expresses very fully the complex psychological state of being in the family, the sadness of neglect, and the longing for attention and closeness to family members. It didn't make me feel pretentious or anything like that, just, well, it will happen naturally and make people feel that it is indeed the case. There will be such emotions or thoughts in it, which can make people understand him. Then there's the growth of this character. After all, he was still a child who was frightened and panicked at the beginning, and then gradually took the initiative to find solutions to problems. The author's transition was very natural, and his growth was also great. He was almost completely different from Ron in the original book. He began to become knowledgeable, brave and resourceful, but in essence they have many similarities, such as the desire to be cared for by their family, and in some cases He was more reckless and rushed like an angry lion, which made me feel that this character is very, very multi-faceted. It did not make me feel that this character had completely changed, or that he was not like Ron in the original book at all. It made me feel that Ron is Ron, but I just didn't know him well enough and didn't see other sides of him. I am very grateful to the author for letting me see that. I think this character is so... It touches me. And then there is the praise for the author😘😘: The author is really great, you must stick to it, I will always support you. This is my first time to write such a long book review, and I feel that this book is worth writing. It is the one that makes me most empathetic. Never give up😘😘❤❤, and the author is really super hard-working, the update speed is super super super, 5 updates a day is simply a role model for us. 😘~(^◇^)/You must persist, I love the author so much (^_-)≡(˘ ³˘)❤ Author, I'm going to starve to death. Come back quickly. I don't ask for more from you. You can just write me a note asking for leave. At least it gives me something to look forward to. 😢 😢
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Very very very very beautiful! I love so much! First of all, the setting is very novel! This is the first time I have read a HP fanfic with Ron as the protagonist and about Ron's awakening. And even when he awakens, it is very consistent with Ron's original character. You can see Ron's gradual growth. The author's control of Ron is really good! Let the protagonist (?) Who has been ignored for a long time also have his own shining point! I like it very much! It's a pity that it's still being serialized and I'm very anxious to read it!
I don't have much to say about this book. In one word, it's a t0 work. It's of such high quality. When I read it, I clearly felt that the author really worked hard to complete this work. Everyone's image is really very real, giving me the feeling they should have. Ron really surprised me. Just like other book friends, I was completely immersed in his emotions. However, I have read some bad reviews from book friends. What should I say? It's hard for me to make some comments, but I really think this is a relatively high-quality book. I feel that if this book is repaired, it will definitely become a god. Even with just a little repair, it will reach its peak. Here, because this is my first time to post a relatively long book review, I really can't express myself well. Other book friends all think this book is of high quality and praise each other as being better and longer than the other. In order to compete for the position in the author's heart, I can only post it. And the author, because your book is really of high quality, but there are too few chapters, most of us will choose to keep it. Don't run away, everyone likes a well-completed book. You only have 100 chapters, and you can have more than 100 updates, so you can have fun secretly. This is really very good. I am an old book friend, believe me, I'm right. I'm just nagging here. If you really want to choose a book, please read the second paragraph. Don't read the rest. Then read other book friends' comments. Thank you.
A very novel angle, the first time I see this type of Ron. Instead of becoming a transparent, brave and typical Gryffindor Ron like other stories, he became like the other Weasley brothers. Instead, he is a young man with love in his heart, rich emotions, sensitive and low self-esteem, and at the same time, he is also a growing Slytherin, lifelike. If he didn't have a golden finger, or if he was more arrogant and elegant, or if his temperament was more sensitive and gloomy, it would inevitably remind me of Regulus Black who silently fought with his own life in the original work. He would still be impulsive and do wrong things, but at critical moments, such a "mortal" would still fight to the death to do what he thinks is right. Compared with Harry Potter and Sirius, they are indeed not as dazzling, but they are also flesh and blood and have truly lived.
They say that we have to write a different Ron, and there are already dozens of them. Starting with these two, we should change his character. Otherwise, I won't be very motivated to continue reading, and he will still be too childish like before. (These two are really about changing his character from here. I feel it is very good, and let Ron really change from Gryffindor to Slantlin.
One thing that impressed me about this novel was the portrayal of the character of Slytherin. Some works tend to overemphasize their maturity and complexity when depicting Slytherin students, making the characters feel more like adults than 11-year-old children. The author balances this deftly. Although there are indeed elements of struggle, unity, and interest entanglements within Slytherin, these descriptions do not appear to be exaggerated or divorced from reality, but are shown through a child's perspective, making people feel friendly and credible. I also really like Ron's character. He is brave, witty, occasionally has some little calculations, and is also a bit stubborn. The story of sorting a child who originally belonged to a Gryffindor family into Slytherin was very well written. Make him appear more three-dimensional and real. Especially when facing his friends, his selflessness and willingness to stand up for them show the qualities of an outstanding young man. It was this natural kindness and integrity that earned him the trust and support of his friends. As the book shows, when you stand up for what is right, people will naturally be attracted to you and choose to stand with you. The portrayal of Snape is also very good. He is not like the vicious tongue that is only a few stereotypes in many fans. He has hidden concern (in fact, it is impossible to see it according to the way some works are written), and respect for Deng. He is a rich person. Overall, the characterization and plot design are very natural. The author did not deliberately exaggerate or exaggerate any plot, but showed the growth and interaction of the characters through delicate writing, which is indeed good. I hope you won't stop updating and continue writing.