
Journey to the West: This Demon Isn’t Right
西游之这个妖怪不对劲儿
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- Fantasy High-Concept
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- 4y ago
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Seasoned Readers, Come On In and Swap Book Recommendations
For the most demanding readers suffering from a book drought. Beginners, stay away.
Beginners Stay Out, 2,000+ Hours Required
No amateurish writing. Ideally one heroine, and preferably mature content. A System is fine if it plays only a minor role.
A World of National Destiny and the Supernatural
Looking for something similar to The Haunted House.
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Completed and Highly Rated! Stop Hoarding Them and Share Your Recommendations!
I'm out of things to read. Lately, I have no idea what to pick up!
Fanfiction Based on Classic TV Dramas
Something like *Nirvana in Fire* and the like.
There Are No More Masterpieces in the Primordial World Genre. Debate Me
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Fantasy Novels with a Demon Protagonist
The protagonist has the bloodline of a demon.
Transmigrate into Classic TV Shows and Movies, but Keep Your Wits About You
For example, *My Date with a Vampire*, *Magic Mobile Phone*, *Myth*, *The Deer and the Cauldron*, *Journey to the West*, *Lotus Lantern*, works by Jin Yong, and Uncle Jiu stories. No ninjas, pirates, Harry Potter, or other Western fantasy. I can't get into those.
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Western Fantasy Setting, Mages, Fully Developed Worldbuilding
I'd like to read something like *Lord of Ashes*. 1. A Western fantasy novel with a mage protagonist, preferably one who has creative ideas about magic and can develop their own unique magic or spellcasting system, like *Throne of Magical Arcana* by Cuttlefish. 2. A magic-and-farming story, preferably one that...
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The Protagonist Creates Their Own Cultivation System
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Primordial-Era Stories Where the Protagonist Creates a Fourth Path to Sainthood
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Primordial Era Novels That Don't Villainize the Six Saints
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The Protagonist Is a Terrifying Ghost in a World of Horror
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The part about the battle between Che Chi and the Kingdom of China is the most enjoyable part among all the more than a dozen Journey to the West novels I have read. However, there are some places where the author could have looked up more relevant information, and some places are quite different from the orthodox story.
It should be the most exciting of the Journey to the West fanfics I have read. Although the male protagonist has two wives, there are almost no emotional scenes throughout the whole process. He has been continuously separated in two places after being married for more than 200 years. Although he is a bit nosy and extremely partial, it is not out of the ordinary and makes people feel that it should be like this. The author is great,^0^~
Don't know what? I like it when I criticize Buddha!
Very good book, different from ordinary monkey blowing
After three days, I finally finished reading it. It's worth five stars just because it keeps me motivated to watch. The foreshadowing laid out in the early stage and so on are all revealed in the follow-up, and the outline is also good. I saw a different perspective on Journey to the West. The later stage was too hasty and there was no patience and carefulness in the early stage. The ending was too fast which was not good. Overall, it's a good Journey to the West novel that I've read that I'm quite satisfied with.
If fellow Taoists don't care about those detailed settings, you can still read this book. This book is more martial arts-oriented. The protagonist's upgrade is slow in the early stage and too fast in the later stage. This book is quite good. In the early stage, I was submissive and was always being plotted as a pawn. I cleverly avoided the fatal game in Hidden Mist Mountain. Then I entered the Tang Dynasty and got deeper involved with the underworld. I think these two parts are the best. After provoking heaven and entering the Buddhist kingdom, it started to collapse. A big part of what makes this book interesting is that it is different from other prehistoric novels. Most of them cheat invincibly or remain silent all the way. The most direct one is the chapters on Hidden Mist Mountain. Another point is that in the emotional drama of this book, the two heroines are like soy sauce.
This book still has some information, the author's skills are also good, and it is not a novice... The various logics are good, and the key worldview is clear... At the end, Hongjun didn't win, and it felt like it ended hastily. Postscript Time has returned to modern times. It would be nice if we could clearly compare the real world with the prehistoric world before the restart. The last sentence is any book that keeps me staying up late reading is good. And the most important thing is not to add a sentence: "The prince and the princess lived a happy life from then on."
After reading it for a few days, I finally finished it. If you haven't finished it, please don't comment. The first half of the book mainly talks about the protagonist and Journey to the West, that is, the grievances between the protagonist and Buddhism. After Journey to the West, the protagonist grows up and becomes a chess piece of Western religion (Buddhism is a chess piece of Western religion), the underworld, the sea of blood and Hongjun. Under the calculations of all parties, the protagonist's luck and jade card is finally revealed. The story of this book is like a mist being lifted layer by layer. In summary, this is a good book.
They are: Qi training, foundation building, golden elixir, Yuanying, transforming gods, anti-empty, earthly immortal, heavenly immortal, true immortal, golden immortal, Daluo Jinxian, Hunyuan Daluo Jinxian.
Fine. At first I thought it was a no-brainer, but after looking at it I realized it was a traditional fairy tale.