I Rely on My Good-for-Nothing Disciples to Keep Me Alive

(The review contains spoilers) Uh-huh, how should I put it, I have read many novels in Tomato Novels, and this is the first novel that I actively want to review but feel embarrassed. Generally speaking, the flow of the book is very clear, one chapter links to another, and it can be clearly seen that the author has laid out the outline, from the protagonist's initial acceptance of four apprentices, to the establishment of Wuxiang Palace, to the grudges and grudges with the eldest apprentice a hundred years ago. This aspect is indeed well written. Next, I will talk about the areas where I think this book needs improvement. Starting from the third chapter of the book, I begin to answer the foreshadowing laid earlier, which is the apprentice that the protagonist took in a hundred years ago. From the chapters, it can be seen that the author wants to show our readers the love and hatred between the master and the apprentice, and wants to impress the readers. In this process, it can be seen that the author is very careful; but starting from this chapter also leads to a very big problem in my opinion: the reader has a sense of distance from the book. For a good novel, the emotions of the protagonist and the reader should be closely intertwined, so that there is a sense of involvement. But in this novel, starting from the second chapter, I felt a sense of distance from the novel. The third chapter, which should have been full of warmth and touching, had no emotion in my heart, and I felt like I was outside the story. . . This may be due to the author's lack of control over the text, but I think the author is also aware of this situation and is trying his best to improve it. I haven't read the latest one yet, because it's too late now, it's already two o'clock ( •̥́ ㉨ •̀ू ). Based on the previous content I give this book four stars. In addition, if you are new friends, please give me a like if you see this ( ,,´･㉨･)ﾉ"(´っω･｀｡)（嘤嘤嘤） I wish you a good mood all day

It feels a bit aggrieved that the protagonist, one of the three great immortals, is in a realm several lower than himself and has to use his lifespan to use magic. But I still like this type of novel.

This book has aspects of cultivation, lolita, vixen, yandere, and master-disciple romance. In short, this book contains everything I want to read. It would be nice if there were more daily routines between master and disciple.

I only learned about the book Junior Brother, You Are So Not Human. It also has a prequel. It can be said that the author is so nice, and it completely captured my heart. Both books are very good, or they are both too good-looking. I look forward to the author's next novel [smirk][snicker][smirk]

Highly recommended. I read it in one sitting, a very good book. Fantasy, harem, master and apprentice, invincible flow, the writing should be impartial. This kind of relationship between master and apprentice is really great, especially the love and death between the eldest apprentice, which is really addictive. The climax of the book is okay, but the length is not very big, yandere, yyds. Overall, how should I put it? I can't describe it better. You will feel that it is quite ordinary, but the plot is very attractive and the characters in it are also very well created. You will want people to keep watching, and the needle will not poke at the air on the mountain. No more pretending, I'm showing off my cards, I'm hanging silk, I love watching.

The book is pretty good, with a relaxed plot, from the amnesiac Immortal Lord who accepts a female disciple, to slowly regaining his memory, and finally becoming the way of heaven. But I have to mention some shortcomings. First, there are a lot of holes dug, and many of them are not filled in. Second, it is a bit aggrieved. Let's not talk about being subdued by a female apprentice who is also in the Celestial Realm. NND, you are an immortal in the Celestial Realm, and you have to fight back and forth with the Xuanxian Realm one level lower than you. It's not bad that you can't kill an enemy two levels lower than you with all your strength. Third, although the ending is good, it doesn't reach the height expected. Hope to keep up the good work.

This kind of subject matter is really good, I like it very much.

To be honest, it is very good. It has a leisure life and a passion for cultivating immortality. It is a good novel. In the end, plainness is the best [laughs] (Personal preferences are different, so there is no need to argue about it) [laughs] I like this style very much, thank the author for his great work!

To be honest, after reading so many books, there are only five that can keep me going for a few days. I have been reading this book for nearly a week. The writing is really good. I like this kind of daily life. Although I can't get enough of it, please come on, author⊙▽⊙ So I'm starving for books again! Help!

Four stars, the ending is too hasty, the process is too compact, the story line is not long, the short story style is okay