I'm Already Invincible, So Why Make Me Take on a Rebellious Disciple Who Wants to Become My Master?

Update quickly! I can't get enough of this! 💕 Good-looking and good-looking

It's great, I hope many people can watch it together 😅

If anyone wants to read this novel and sees my review, you can read this summary first: The content is generally good, the plot speed is moderate, and it is not a forced completion. The ending of the plot is satisfactory but slightly deviates from the foreshadowing of the initial chapter, but it does not affect the viewing. The slight flaw is that some character names are confusing. There are comments below but they involve spoilers. If you want to read the novel, you can read it directly. If you can accept the general plot and opinions of the author, you can continue reading. Let's talk about the book first and then the author: Book: Although this article has few chapters, the plot is good and makes people more and more interested in the subsequent content. Sometimes the plot progresses too fast, but overall it is not bad. The only shortcoming in the book is that some names in the middle of the text are often spelled incorrectly, so you need to pay more attention later. Author: In the last picture, you can see the author's unwillingness to force the ending (actually locking him in a small dark room), and also pointed out his own shortcomings. But what I recognize most about the author is that the novel has been completed completely. No matter how the book is viewed, how collected it is, or how much profit it makes, I am very happy that you persisted in finishing it. Because most authors just force the end when they see that the benefits are not enough. I have a suggestion for this: If the author can continue to write with the attitude of not forcing the ending and finishing the article, I recommend that the author should not write too short, but can be slightly longer: for example, in the beginning of this article, you wrote that 9 female apprentices will be trained to become empresses, but at the moment There were only 3 people at the beginning, and you can write out all 9, but the plot develops too quickly - fast cultivation, quick completion of the demon ancestor's true form, etc. Although the plot develops too fast, at least the general plot and overall outline of the 9 empresses + ascension to the fairy world are still completed.

I rushed one in a hundred chapters, it's not bad.

It was good to have some self-reflection at the end.

I don't have anything bad to say, it just looks good! 😄

Pure invincibility is short

That's great, I'm so generous

Being able to recognize your own writing deficiencies and mistakes is valuable. I hope you can make progress in your future creations

Very good, I like it very much