Watchdog

Well, do you want to leave your name to play a small role? You can leave a message. By the way, I am the author of this book.

Ah, come on, author, I'm waiting for the second one, hoping it can be improved. Structure: Well, the system (the chapters I read) has not yet appeared completely, so I will not make an evaluation. The pacing is a bit tight, so it is recommended to add some relaxing daily routines between the stories. Rating ★★half (I suggest the author read "I Have a House That Terrorizes Me" or "I Can Go Back Infinitely" to learn from it. To be honest, there are very few third-person horror novels) Content: Let me first talk about the atmosphere rendering, which cannot make people immersed in the scene. If a story ends quickly, it will be difficult to make people immersive. In terms of story setting, novels with causes and consequences will make people more profound. If the author's conditions allow, he can add a story for the ghosts and ghosts, which will gradually unfold during the protagonist's adventure. Also, the system setting is an aspect that is not very successful. The author has added a training system, which reduces the sense of substitution. However, if the author can control it well, it will be unconventional. Rating ★★half to ★★★half Overall rating ★★half to ★★★ Postscript: If the author can improve, this book can still reach ★★★★. After all, I prefer reading third-person horror novels.

Very good, I was so scared that I quickly gave it five stars🌞

I can't speak either, so give me five stars!

I'll give Shuhuang Square five stars first and let's see how it goes.

Mainly because I pity the author. . .

Okay, okay, the supernatural system text that I have been waiting for has finally appeared. I fell in love with one two days ago but unfortunately it has been removed from the shelves for some reasons 😂😂😂😂 I thought the future was bleak, but I never thought that there would be a light now. I have not liked system texts since I entered the trap, but the bizarre themes are nice. There are really few similar stories, and the author has set a precedent. I have fulfilled my wish and must praise it. I hope it will continue after the novel is completed.

Big boost to the author 💪

Big cheers for the author The es book turned out to be a eunuch

The front is good, keep chasing 🌚