Siheyuan: Train Terror, a Merit System from the Start

This book is substandard, even the original plot is wrong, and it greatly weakens Goldfinger.

Does the protagonist's meal of several kilograms of beef cost more than 3,000 merit points?? Is this merit equivalent to Myanmar currency? So cheap

This book died in Chapter 36 and it was another huge mistake. A cadre plus a dual-employee job earned a salary of just over 30. The author didn't even graduate from the first grade of elementary school in mathematics. My father, at the end of 1955, the cadre, security section chief, and researcher received a total salary of more than 200 yuan. The regiment leader retired.

I suggest the author rewrite the first thirty-six chapters. There are many huge loopholes and wrong details. It is simply outrageous.

This book died in Chapter 26. Jia Dongxu died in ** years at the latest. The protagonist came back ** years ago. Why is he still here? It's outrageous.

Chapter 35 of this book is another huge mistake. Why did the original protagonist's merits change from buying forty merits to just a few merits? This is a huge mistake.

There are three major loopholes in this book and the plot is wrong. The first is that the train to save the old man. Chang uses half a pill of elixir and elixir too much. Later, the bathhouse changes so quickly and drastically. If you use half a pill, the supernatural will be discovered. The second is that turning into a super big eater makes Goldfinger look weak, brainless and incompetent, and it is too restrictive for the protagonist. The third is that Jia Dongxu died in 1961 to 62. There are huge loopholes and errors in this book, and it is still there at the end of 1965.

What the hell are you writing about? I don't understand the relationship between the family. One moment he is the elder brother and the next moment he is the younger brother. One moment he is in school and the next he is a worker.

About the world in my book "Siheyuan: Train Shock, Starting Merit System" Chapter 135: Dinner at my aunt's house! Cousin and cousin are too enthusiastic Chapter review.

The first thirteen chapters, which are all heavy, go back and forth in order to show the protagonist's dangers and capture the enemy's special forces. But you must have written it in sixty-five years? Let's not talk about anything else, let's just say that in Jia Dongxu's original play, people in 1965 have been hanging on the wall for several years, and the tombstones have been growing for several years, and you are asked to take them out again? Do you know what era you are writing about? I can't even find the time period, so why bother writing?