Pokemon: Me, Ash! The Pokémon Master

? Where is your time traveler memory? Why don't you know anything?

Dear readers, if you have a favorite Pokémon or heroine, please tell me and collect it.

Some things haven't been changed properly Chapter 12, no changes, does Lulili's series have heart decorations? The illustrated book also describes the evolution of Marylou. Are you sure it's not reversed? Chapter 15, no changes, after gaining the power of waveguide, Pikachu's gym peak suddenly reached the early stage of King, Charizard suddenly reached the middle stage of Quasi King, and suddenly reached the middle stage of King. Chapter 29, has it not been changed that Aaron has a monster called Arbo? Then the next chapter becomes a big-billed bird. Chapter 30, no change, Shakiras is just a cocoon, where are the thick limbs? They are silver-gray instead of gray and black, and then they evolve bone spurs and turn into wings. Do you want to take off? Bankiras is green, and you are dark gray? Where are the giant wings? Chapter 34, some parts have not been completely changed Chapter 56, not completely changed. Steel Wing is a pure steel type skill and is not restrained against fighting type.

Author, I found some problems. Did you forget about the settings you wrote earlier? For example, in the Groudon section, you give Groudon the floating property and let it fly. But later on, after conquering Kyogre and returning to Zhenxin Town to your own exclusive island, you write that after time travel, it is a bit strange to encounter Groudon who is not only powerful but also has the ability to fly? What I'm talking about here is the Groudon you conquered. You are completely inconsistent and there are many questions. Sometimes Xiaoyao writes Xiaoxia, and Xiaosheng calls his mother aunt? Isn't she her biological mother? After a while, I wrote that Xiaoyao and the others actually knew the points and rewards awarded by the system? Then when you meet Xiao Shun or whoever it is, you say you don't have enough points and you need to earn them! The following content is that the secrets of the system cannot be known to anyone. There are also inconsistencies here, and there is a really strong sense of fragmentation! Pay attention when you write. Wouldn't it be nice to check what you've written after you've written it?

Will Ruki Rukia be able to harvest the source of abundance?

Chapters 136 and 138, the owner of Fuyan Gym is called Uncle Xia. Don't you check what you write?

Don't have so many levels. The early, middle and late peaks are like third-rate fantasy. Just have a rough level.

Apart from some Pokémon collection and some plot tweaks, is there any difference between this book and the original?

Chapter 67, Desert Naia hugs Kojiro with vines. Does your cactus have vines? The lantern fish is a level evolution. You created it yourself and used the fire stone to evolve, right? In the Fangyuan region, the only types of fire stones that are used are the ones I mentioned. That sentence you wrote is completely redundant. Check it out before writing. In Chapter 68, Boss Cordora set the Quasi-King of Mid-term to be Daigo's main force. Then in Chapter 63, the random writing caused Ash's Charizard to suddenly appear, and the appearance was written to be in the Mid-King of Quasi-King. In Chapter 15, it suddenly became the Mid-King of Heaven. After I said this chapter, it became the Mid-King of Heaven. It's chaotic, and you also have a battle of Quasi-King of your own. Chapter 69, **** article, this chapter says that Boss Cordora is Daigo's main force, which is very problematic. Don't you think it's strange that the champion's main force is the Quasi-King? Also, where did the final evolutionary form of Spinytail come from?

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