Pokemon: Champion Ash Gets Stronger by Making Up for His Regrets
精灵：冠军小智，弥补遗憾就变强
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 4.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- English
- Request a translation
Synopsis
Stats
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
1.8kChapters
22.1MReads
233.9kMonthly reads
10.0Score
265.3kFlowers
12 ch/weekPace
Honours
More like this
Pokemon: Reborn as Ash, I Get Stronger by Making Up for Regrets
Digital Showdown: How That Taichi Became the Digital Emperor
Anime Crossover: Exorcising Spirits in Daily Life, Rewarded with the Eight Great Techniques from the Start
Hunter X Hunter: Pokémon Master, Strongest in the World
Pokemon: A Look at Ash's Peak Battles Against the Masters Eight!
Genshin Impact: My Past Life Is Revealed, and I Was the Demon King of Time?
I Just Ascended the Throne as Emperor of Australia, and Now World War II Has Broken Out?
Siheyuan: Starting in 1960 by Opening the Back Garden
Pokemon: Snatching Opportunities, I'm Invincible!
[Anime Crossover] I Plunder Worlds in Everyday Life
American Comics: I’m Warner, the God King, and I Declare War on Asgard
Siheyuan: My Sentence Was Reduced and I’m Out of Prison, So Why Are You Panicking?
Film and TV: How Could My Sister Be Qiao Jingjing?
Siheyuan: God-Tier Choices, Emptying the Treasury from the Start
Chat Group: I’m in Great Qin, and the Eastern Goddess Is Here to Bring Me Good Luck
Genshin Impact: My Past Life Is Revealed, and I Turn Out to Be Kevin the Savior
Ranking the Overpowered Combatants: Mythical Daluo Shakes the Myriad Worlds
Joyful Film and TV: Making Ziyan's Mom Swoon in Black Stockings!
Film and TV: Comforting Li Na, Then Sweeping Gu Jia and Andy Off Their Feet
KO One: The System Boosts My Battle Power Index Through the Roof
In the Name of the People: Transferred to Handong, I Crush Anyone Who Shows Off
NBA: A God-Tier Small Forward Who Can Upgrade Traits
Honghuang: With Heaven-Defying Comprehension, I Become a Chaos Sage as the World Tree
In the Name of the People: I, Gao Yuliang, Rise to the Top Starting as Governor
Jiangshi: Taking a Wife from the Start, I Unlock the Chat Group of the Myriad Worlds
Pokemon: My Father Is a Champion, Starting with a Shiny Metagross
Reader comments 78
Google Translate
Updates will be performed at 9:00 AM and 6:00 PM. Two chapters a day, 10,000 words each, with occasional bonus chapters. I don't keep any drafts; I write as much as I want and then discard it. Writing 10,000 words a day is quite a lot, after all, it's not like the words will automatically appear the moment you put your hands down on the keyboard, right?
It's getting increasingly padded. Do you think you can't write a book without padding? A large portion of each chapter is meaningless description, and the plot is so thin. You keep padding it out. I've felt something was off since it was first published, and it's gotten even worse since then. Keep padding it out and let's see how much your subscriptions drop.
We're looking at Xiao Zhi, not a harem time traveler.
Red is strong, but the hype is ridiculous. First, let's not even mention that all the characters in the Journey game are level 80; Red is only around level 80 in the beginner stages. In the Sun & Moon storyline, I remember he was only around level 70. In Pokémon Masters EX, Ash, Red, and Leon are at the same level. In Journey, Ash defeats Leon. Why is Red so strong? This is just wishful thinking.
It's gotten a bit wordy. The Fire-Breathing Dragon Valley story has eight chapters, totaling 40,000 words... There are too many areas that can be streamlined. It's like they're afraid the readers won't understand, so they have to explain it again and again. Write a story about swapping out the King of Charizard. I can write dozens of paragraphs.
Darkor, hailed as the "Divine Beast Man," only revealed one Mythical Pokémon and one Divine Pokémon. The identities of the remaining four are still unknown. Given that Darkor has no record of any Pokémon in the World Championships, it's unlikely he possesses only Divine Pokémon; even if he does, they're probably just cute Mythical Pokémon for show.
No, Red's Pikachu is way overpowered, isn't it? A legendary Pokémon?? I could accept Red's Charizard and Venusaur being legendary Pokémon, but Red isn't Ash's main Pokémon trainer. Shouldn't Red be Charizard or Venusaur?
Teacher, did you run away? Chapter 265 onwards is completely incomprehensible... I'm speechless.
Who's still reading this novel? Tell me how it's progressing, is it still a mess? If it is, I'm not reading it anymore.
Add some pictures of elves and female characters to each chapter! Good authors should learn to include their own illustrations; a few pictures can brighten up dry text.