Pokemon: The Unbreakable Bond of Ash

Don't keep adding Xiaomei into the mix. It's annoying. Is the author of a passerby character a lolicon?

The author didn't write the female protagonists well. Although Xiaozhi admitted that those female protagonists were his girlfriends, there was no behavior at all. Even if you write it in a more ambiguous way, for example, after one night, how the heroine's body is when she wakes up the next day, and you don't write about the middle process, just let us know that Xiaozhi ate them.

The beginning of the tournament was particularly long-winded. We were already Kanto champions, and we were still indistinguishable from the others. It was endless, right? We had to climb up from the lowest score level little by little. How could the Kanto champion be so unworthy? Can't you crush someone who is so far behind in the ranking?

Bond What is bond? Long-term companionship, deep friendship, this is the bond. You have conquered so many Pokémon, isn't that the same as the original boy? After taming them for a few times, they threw them into the backyard and let Dr. Oak take care of them. This is not responsible at all. The biggest point of this time-travelling novel is that it is like Xiaozhi who blindly tamed so many Pokémon. There is no need for so many.

The further I look back, the more uncomfortable I feel. I say it's the heroine, but I really don't feel it. It's not that I have to go to bed, but what, at least treat everyone equally, right? The protagonist's attitude towards Serena is completely different from the attitude towards other heroines. Others can only be said to be lovers above friends. There is not much ambiguity to say that they are lovers. Only the attitude towards Serena is different. There are also emotional scenes, and they are particularly dramatic. It is a very awkward emotional scene because the protagonist is completely useless and does not have so much delicate thoughts towards other heroines. However, he ends up with Serena. How come the other heroines are not girlfriends? So I read it more and more unsatisfactoryly. The most interesting part of the whole novel is that of Carlos or Serina. The plots are very awkward. The other heroines are just as ordinary as water. Only Serena is different, so she doesn't seem to be the usual protagonist. She is said to have multiple heroines, but she is always regarded as a single heroine. After watching it for so many years, I feel really disappointed.

If you don't accept her, she won't have colleagues. It will delay the girl's life of fun. If she is a single heroine, write it down clearly.

Thinking back on the Pokémon novels I was reading back then, Bird's Paladin was far ahead in terms of word count, and Bonding Wisdom and Perfect Start together were about the same as Bird's Paladin. Unexpectedly, the number of words has surpassed that of Bird's Paladin.

A single heroine is a single heroine, and a travel companion is a companion. Why post pictures of the so-called heroine?

Can the author write about Xiaozhi's emotional drama? It feels like the heroine hasn't appeared in a long time.

Dare I ask the author when he will be restored?