Reborn: The Hidden Boss of Handong

You have so many typos! Don't tell me to use other words to replace them. Why can others write it but you can't? Everyone else gets banned but you do? If you're afraid of getting banned, don't write this kind of thing, you idiot. Why would I write about you?

I thought I'd found a decent fanfic about titles, but all the job names are misspelled! It's ridiculous!

Everything else is fine to me, but there are just too many women... One at home, then neighbors, subordinates, bosses, colleagues, regardless of age, he takes them all. That's going too far. A few is fine, but this is too many. It's unbelievable. He's out every night, with no time for himself.

It feels so naive. How could someone in officialdom not be shrewd at all, let alone those in high positions? If the protagonist hadn't died, he would have been devoured without a trace.

I was actually planning to watch it, but the main character's name just blew me away—it's so cringeworthy!

Those words are really ridiculous, and they even talk about cultivating immortality? I'll just say you're a complete idiot.

You've somehow managed to incorporate elements from the TV series "A Little Reunion." Think about it: the welfare housing provided by the Ministry of Public Security is mostly for the families of public security officers or leaders of the Ministry of Public Security. How could there be other personnel? Even if there are armed police on guard, they certainly wouldn't be as casual as you are.

They've started slacking off again. Four pages a day has become two chapters, and the other book has become one chapter. What's going on?

Your typos are really making it difficult to read.

I don't understand why you still need the system and terminology of Chiang Kai-shek's **collective** during the Republic of China era.