
Anime Crossover: In DanMachi, Building a Familia from the Start
综漫:人在地错,开局打造眷族
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.1M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2d ago
- Source
- Faloo
Stats
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
916Chapters
11.7MReads
633.4kMonthly reads
637.8kFlowers
12.7kMonthly flowers
9.5Score
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What kind of trash is the protagonist? I got a whole set of cheats, seven skills and three magics, doubled attributes, doubled the blue bar a hundred times and added unlimited firepower. I can learn magic at will and copy it, as well as super magic skills. This plug-in has been in the dungeon for half a year and only has a full ability value of 300 at level one? After the introduction of ability values, the protagonist said that the edges were smoothed by the dungeon. If it weren't for being too big, he would lie flat? Not a buddy, what a waste.
It's oily as hell. The author obviously doesn't know how to write romantic and frivolous but steady and cautious characters, which makes the protagonist look like a volatile second-rate with no personality charm at all; Joan of Arc is a scheming Japanese heroine. The interaction between the two is not only unsweet, but also has a formulaic and plastic feel. One bite will make me want to vomit, and I will skip it if the flirting starts. The only thing worthy of praise is the writing style, which is considered "highly educated" here, but if the article is not white, it does not mean that you can write well. Many actions, descriptions, and expressions are too pretentious and greasy, like applying a thick layer of oil paint on the manuscript. At first glance, it looks okay, but the more you read, the more it feels redundant and complicated.
The world view is completely wrong, starting with three magic and seven skills. A bunch of gods can fight to get you into the family. If we want to say that the potential is not enough. Then you should have no skills or magic.
The protagonist is useless, mentally retarded, can't hold up the wall with mud, and has a lot of poison points. What the hell is this? This book is rated 9.3 Which is really impressive. I feel that the people who read this book are some kind of genius.
I think it's okay to write about the lack of potential. The magic and skills of this FW started at the beginning of the year, but it just didn't reach level one? You can't say this is a genius who works hard, right?
The potential is not enough, but it has 3 magic and 7 skills. It looks weird no matter how you look at it.
I don't know much about Dicuo, but I prefer the growth stream, so I can continue to watch it in the early stage, but the hidden points in the later stages are really unavoidable. First, what I feel is the most serious is when the heroine is always written about a supporting character or a heroine whose clothes are torn in battle and her beauty is leaked. The author may think that he is giving benefits to the protagonist, but in fact he is giving benefits to passers-by. The second male protagonist has a bit of a personality, he is always targeted by the female protagonist, and it feels a bit like an ancient novel. Every female protagonist despises the male protagonist, but the male protagonist can get them, but he is still despised. Third, there is the problem of the male protagonist showing off. It is obvious that the author wants to write a story about a low-key male protagonist who does not want to show off, but the male protagonist cannot help but pretend, and it does not feel good to pretend. When he should show off his dignity in front of the girl, it is weird. In some plots, it is obvious that the male protagonist can save the beauty, but other female protagonists are required to come, or when there is a crisis, the male protagonist does not want to be exposed and has to rely on the female co-star to feed him. It is really not comfortable.
There are three magics and seven skills in Dicuo World, but the potential is not enough? ? ? Why do I feel like my IQ has been ravaged by being pinned to the ground?
Shennong was poisoned to death in the second chapter. The protagonist's talent has been useless for two and a half years. Anyone with this talent can take off. I would like to call the male protagonist of this book the most useless protagonist among Dicuo fans. He is a waste among wastes. To be honest, I have never seen such a bad person in so many years of reading novels.
The plot is quite bland, and the protagonist is a classic Japanese light novel male protagonist. He can't be strong in relationships and is passive most of the time. The characters are also OOC. Apart from the same names, the several female protagonists created have no connection with their names. After reading more than a hundred chapters, I really can't stand it. Also, after more than a hundred chapters to save the third female protagonist, the male protagonist has been in the maze for several years and is a so-called "experienced adventurer". However, when he encounters the third female protagonist who was seriously injured upon teleportation, his first reaction is that there is no master of the six gods? ? ? The two heroines are also needed to make suggestions and make decisions immediately, and then there are always some small and charming points that may or may not be made. I really don't understand the meaning of the various posts between the heroines and the heroines. Also, the third female protagonist has arrived. In order to prevent the third female protagonist from seeing the male protagonist immediately after being rescued and waking up, which would lead to the suspension bridge effect, the first two female protagonists deliberately left only the male protagonist open. What does this mean? ? ?