In Konoha, Starting with Caution

Call Uzumaki a redhead and then you tell me you are a civilian ninja?

There are already whirlpools, so why are civilian ninjas here (laughing)

In the final analysis, apart from explaining a lot to the readers and looking very professional, there is no such thing as life experience in the past life. When I thought about not being able to use Kagura's inner eye, I couldn't wait to use it... The so-called hiding in front of the Minato couple is no different from playing monkey tricks. Everyone found out at the first meeting that the protagonist had something to hide... The castle of an adult... The protagonist died at the age of 12, right? It's natural to be boring, and the detonating charms are sold casually, and once he learns Kagura, he uses them without fear... Isn't it just a child showing off... Why not change the setting, he is such a cautious character

His surname is Uzumaki and he has red hair, and he's still hiding it? Are you kidding me?

Clan vortex?? Civilian?? I would still believe it if the main character was called Uzumaki Uzumaki

I wrote it but still couldn't do it, why did I write it?

The writing is long-winded, and the clone can quarrel with the main body to force additional scenes, and everyone around you knows that your hero is hiding something, but it shouldn't be something that just anyone can pinch, right? It's really frustrating to watch.

That Hinata Rin was probably sent to monitor the protagonist's existence to prevent him from revealing too much about the plot or affecting his behavior! Your prudence here is based on your understanding of Hokage, not, I think, prudence in action!!

The writing style is good, the details are also very good, the rhythm is also good, the world expansion and knowledge points are quite useful, and I don't think it is watery.

Your book is earlier than the eunuch book, it's amazing