Anime Crossover: I Stand Up for Nanase Akane from the Start

The plot starts off idiotically. A seven-tailed fox who already has feelings for the protagonist—was it really necessary to have her drugged and then sexually assaulted? They could have easily gotten to the point through normal interaction, but instead, they had to pull this stunt. What's the difference between them and those scumbags? The opening scene is on the playground, and they're acting like complete idiots, with no memories. What a lousy start!

The male lead's behavior from the very beginning was incredibly wasteful. And is this some kind of Xuan Fei Lu (a fictional character known for his cunning and cunning)? The villains beat up the small fry, then the big ones come along; beat up the big ones, then the old ones come along, right? What are we here to watch? You don't understand, yet you're lecturing me about cultivation systems. You're invincible!

They had to include other systems, and even system rankings, while the protagonist's system was only ranked around 800th. It's really hard not to imagine how badly the protagonist would be crushed if he encountered the number one system.

What disappointed me a bit was that these villains were genuinely powerful; they came one after another, endlessly. One was defeated, and another appeared, each more formidable than the last. Couldn't they have written a story where only the protagonist was capable, and everyone else was powerless? People who come to read this aren't here to see how powerful or awesome the villains are.

Why is the author so obsessed with their own power system, with all sorts of random insertions? It's a complete mess. If you're going to write about alternate worlds or crossover anime, just write it properly. Why come up with these nonsensical settings?

Did you avoid all the potential pitfalls when writing this kind of story? One wrong move and you'll end up with a cuckold, and the main character isn't a cow, is he?

There are many minor issues; it's difficult to maintain the ancient martial arts combat system even after internal transformation.

The writing is utter nonsense. The beginning mentions avoiding the attention of the blond minotaur after being included, but then the author still manages to include the villains in the plot. Is this even a proper swordplay? [Author's name]

Why not just set everyone as weaklings and only the protagonist as invincible? Did I come here to watch your story of starting as a child and working as an old man? Did I come here to watch your coin-based combat power system? Did I come here to watch Lifan (a Chinese sports website) get hyped up?

Damn it, the gangsters didn't even kill you, they even wrote that they were going to rape you! After all that, they only crippled you, what a bunch of trash!