Seafaring: Weaving the Future, Leaving the Four Emperors Stunned

It's too overwhelming for the pirates' fighting power. Deidara's front is made of steel with red hair, and Shukaku beats Akainu violently. Are you serious?

In fact, the simplest way to deal with it is to say that the tailed beast has not been fully resurrected. For example, Payne said that thousands of years ago, the Six Paths Sage used great magic to destroy the powerful enemies that hosted the tailed beast, and only the immortal core of the tailed beast remained. The spell sealed the cores of the tailed beasts separately, and used illusions to eliminate the world's memory of the tailed beasts. However, the tailed beasts were immortal after all, so the immortal left a prophecy on the stone slab. After a thousand years, the tailed beasts would be full of energy and resurrected. Now the time has come. In this way, just a ray of energy is enough to prove the existence of the tailed beast. As for the other parts, it has not been resurrected yet.

I think Devil Fruits can be added to the items required to remove the seal of the tailed beasts. For example, the first tail needs the Shasha Fruit, the second tail needs the Burning Fruit, the third tail needs the Swim Fruit, the fourth tail needs the Rock Berry Fruit, the fifth tail needs the Heat Fruit and the Power Fruit, the Six Tails needs the Sticky Fruit and the Smoke Fruit, the Seven Tails needs the Animal Dragonfly Fruit and the Invisibility Fruit, the Eight Tails needs the Ox-Niu Fruit and the Octopus Man, and the Nine Tails needs the Animal Nine Tailed Fox Fruit.

The power of the tailed beast shouldn't be able to suppress the general, right? Also, the protagonist in the back can actually fight the red-haired one by relying on Deidara's template, which is outrageous enough. If he fights Akainu in the front, he can say that the desert terrain has a home field advantage, and with the sealing technique to block the elementalization, it is barely reasonable. But here, the red-haired one can reach the position of the Yonko purely by relying on swordsmanship and domineering. Facing a ninja with high attack and low defense, I think it is normal to kill him in one blow.

The language of the characters is really hard to comment on. They all speak like humans and machines...

You can't count the amount of power you have unleashed. You can pretend to be dead after planting a bomb. Even if your protagonist's character is flawed, he won't survive more than three chapters.

The setting is okay, the plot is okay, but the progress of the plot is too slow and too slow, and there are many voice-over-like explanations in the text, which really affects the viewing experience. If you follow the normal plot and the plot is not so cool, you may have higher popularity and income.

It's best not to have castrated versions of abilities in this type of article

The author's brain… Need to expose your organization in a canopy way? If you want any legendary points, look for opportunities to kill the Celestial Dragons. Then you are the most famous person in the world. Why write such a plan for the future and explain to others that I am the Akatsuki organization and my members want to destroy your world government? This kind of idiotic setting... How childish...

It's hard to comment, it's even worse than that OP.