Seafaring: Weaving the Future, Leaving the Four Emperors Stunned

That's way too much of a power level for pirates! Deidara going head-to-head with Shanks, and Shukaku beating up Akainu, are you serious?

The simplest way to handle this would be to say that the Tailed Beasts haven't fully revived yet. For example, Pain could say that a thousand years ago, the Sage of Six Paths used immense power to obliterate the nine Tailed Beasts in order to eliminate the powerful enemy residing within them, leaving only the immortal cores.

I think the items needed to unseal the tailed beasts could include Devil Fruits. For example, the One-Tail would need the Sand-Sand Fruit, the Two-Tail the Flame-Flame Fruit, the Three-Tail the Swim-Swim Fruit, the Four-Tail the Magma-Magma Fruit, the Five-Tail the Heat-Heat Fruit and the Strength-Strength Fruit, the Six-Tail the Sticky-Sticky Fruit and the Smoke-Smoke Fruit, the Seven-Tail the…

The power of a tailed beast shouldn't be enough to suppress an admiral, right? And later on, the protagonist, relying on Deidara's template, was able to fight Shanks, which is quite absurd. Earlier, when One-Tailed Beast fought Akainu, it was somewhat understandable that the desert terrain gave him a home-field advantage, and the sealing technique sealed his elemental transformation.

The characters' dialogue is really hard to describe; they all speak like machines...

You didn't even realize the power you unleashed. You planted a bomb and then pretended to be dead. With your protagonist's personality, even with a cheat code, you wouldn't survive more than three chapters.

The premise and plot are acceptable, but the pacing is too slow and drawn-out, and the frequent use of voice-over commentary really detracts from the reading experience. A more focused and less drawn-out plot might have resulted in higher popularity and revenue.

It's best to avoid censored versions of this type of story.

The author's brain... Is it necessary to expose the organization using a canopy-like structure? I want to find a legendary spot to take down the Celestial Dragons. Then you would be the most famous person in the world. Why bother writing about some kind of future plan, explaining to others that I'm from the Akatsuki organization and my members are going to destroy the World Government? That's such a stupid setup... How childish...

Hard to rate, even worse than that OP.