Tomb Raiding: An Eternal Clan, Swallowed Star Cultivation from the Start

I wanted to laugh when I saw the last sentence of Chapter Thirty-Four. The moment you said that, I knew how incompetent the author was. Only the weak complain about their women's weakness. For the strong, their women's strength is irrelevant. As long as they are strong enough to protect everything they have, that's enough.

Author, have you read the original novel "Devourer"? If not, I suggest you read it before writing. Otherwise, you'll easily be misled. Only a high-level warrior can lift a few hundred kilograms? You say you've read the original, but I guarantee no one who has will believe you.

Hurry up and add a few more female leads! I've already followed up to chapter 85, and I thought you were writing a monk's story! It would be better to have a clan leader's wife. Most male readers probably prefer a character who stays by their side from humble beginnings, never abandoning them, until they rise to power!

I didn't want to read any further after reading Chapter 51. This author of the *Swallowing the Stars* system... Even with mental power reaching the intermediate-level warrior stage, he can't fly, and he can't even lift a few hundred kilograms. What kind of intermediate-level warrior is that? This rubbish, nonsensical system shouldn't be written if you can't write it properly.

You've already devoured the stars, and you still want to raid tombs? How incredibly bored would you have to be to do that?

How could the three worlds of Dragon and Serpent, Biohazard, and Mythology be only at the first level? Dragon and Snake is a prequel to Star Emperor; Bio-Alice can shoot down satellites; Mythology explains how one can travel through time and space and achieve immortality. Also, during the timeline of Joy of Life, a space war was still raging outside Earth, yet it was only a second-tier world.

The player-centric strategy even features a castrated protagonist; speechless.

In Chapter 60-something, at the tomb of King Mu of Western Zhou, a nobody actually sacrificed himself to King Mu, increasing its power by two or three times? What are those extraordinary warriors from the Chu family anyway? Mentalists? Extraordinary warriors can travel several meters per second? Just standing there watching? Is this what you call a soldier? A monkey soldier or an Indian soldier?

It was alright at first, but it got less and less interesting. They turned a proper tomb raiding story into a multiverse story, and then it just kept writing about the world of "Covering the Sky." They might as well have changed it to tomb raiding in different worlds; it just got more and more boring.

To be honest, this is a really bad book. Why does it keep trying to compare itself to Luo Feng? You, with your cheat-like abilities, can't even compare to him, yet you're still embarrassed? There are plenty of people with cheat-like abilities who are much stronger than you, yet you still like to compare yourself to others; I really don't understand.