Growing Up in Shimotsuki Village with the Super-Sweet Zoro

You posted in the wrong place, this is for male-oriented content, male-oriented content.

Do male-oriented novels also have female perspectives?

It seems that gay men in male-oriented content shouldn't be underestimated (*head for protection)

Okay, I guess I just can't accept this kind of remarriage story; it's too cheesy.

If nothing unexpected happens, this should be a marriage proposal.

Go to Ciwei Cat Bar, not many people on Feilu watch "Transformation".

I haven't seen any stories about brides getting married on Feilu for almost two years.

In short, get married or become a white person—don't try to have your cake and eat it too. If you try to have your cake and eat it too, then write that you're single. I hate it most when writing a transformation story and not specifying your sexual orientation; it's like trying to have your cake and eat it too.

You could write a story about a man dressing as a woman, or even just cross-dressing and fooling Zoro; those would get better results than this.

Zoro's character design has been changed a bit too much. He's supposed to be a straight-laced, masculine guy, but you've changed him to have the same kind of idiotic, sassy personality as Sanji.