
Seafaring: Retired Veteran, Silver Fang Template!
航海:退役老兵,银色獠牙模板!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.0M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
765Chapters
6.7MReads
9.2kFlowers
8.3Score
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Reader comments 50
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I stopped watching One Piece after reaching the top. Why, the three views are inconsistent. I had some small objections from the beginning. Luffy only defeated but not killed the pirates in the East China Sea. Well, that's understandable, but the editor wouldn't allow it! How can people die casually in a hot-blooded comic? I learned about Luffy's life experience in the middle, emmm, I was depressed. Is this an adventure story of a hot-blooded boy? This is the travel diary of the rich second generation!! Then came the battle at the top, where Whitebeard went to die. He indeed earned a lot of tears, but that was for this indomitable old man! As for Ace, he is a hot-blooded and willful man. In terms of strength, he is at the level of a lieutenant general at most. In terms of strategy, isn't a pirate a hot-blooded guy? How many descriptions of military strategies are there? The arrangements for the top war are just tactics at most. To put it bluntly, it is just soldiers versus soldiers against generals. If he was not the brother of the protagonist Luffy, and he was one of the rare handsome men in the original work, how many people would feel sorry for him? Speaking of Kirby, this is the character I despise the most. In appearance, he has pink hair and looks like a loser; during his peak period, a little soldier dared to call a truce without the marshal's order, and even stood in front of Akainu to block his superior's actions. Emmmm, maybe in my childhood, this was a heroic act, but in my eyes, this was the act of being shot for five minutes after going to a military court! Although I don't like Akainu either, after all, he involved too many innocent people in order to destroy the pirates, but he was the only one fighting hard in the top period! The other top combat powers are either paddling or pretending to be dead. Just like that, there is an unscrupulous recruit who comes to stop him. Are you going to die, Kebi?!! I heard that two years later he was promoted to captain or something, and I was completely disappointed in the navy. Nothing much to say. Finally, I was not surprised to hear that Luffy had awakened the Nika Fruit. After all, I have always paid attention to the theory of blood in my childhood, even in hot-blooded movies. In the three major comics of "Death and Fire Sea", isn't the main character awesome from his ancestors?! I really hope to see a pirate novel that fits my three views, and by the way, I can educate Akainu that he doesn't care about the casualties of innocent people. From my point of view, it's really unpleasant.
Ace has a total of three plots, Alabasta, fighting Blackbeard, fighting the war, and adding some memories. Why are they all small supporting characters with different intentions, and there are not many scenes of Sand Crocodile. The result is like Sauron's death, with a bunch of people booing. This matter is the same as Teppei Hara, I can't figure out what's wrong with it. Just like Shanks said, you have to think about being killed when you shoot. It's all the consequences of your own actions. Whitebeard is really touching, Ace really doesn't feel it. If he is the same as Itachi, he is handsome all the way, then there must be fans. You Whitebeard won't let you go, you have to go, so you come out. You have to use some skills to show it off. Marine Gao Zhan is either paddling or being dragged, so he can't just run away. The most fundamental problem is that his death is essentially a good thing. Marines have no problem killing pirates, but Akainu has a problem with killing civilians. O'Hara recalled that no one scolded him, but now he does the right thing. Just like Danzo, Danzo's alienation between Hanzo and Nagato is definitely a contribution to Konoha.
The useless protagonist, even Blackbeard doesn't dare to kill him, he is a useless person
Kerby is not dead on the top. It is estimated that Garp protects him. Otherwise, no matter how many times he behaves on the battlefield, he will die. The marshal didn't even tell him to stop, but he jumped here and there on his own. This kind of behavior is the following. If you don't contribute to the top, forget it. At one time, I wanted to be a deserter. I had no discipline at all. I don't know how to become a navy.
Isn't it smart to write a novel? Can't you just give it a name that does as the Romans do? Isn't it embarrassing to use a Chinese name?
He boasts that he is decisive in killing, but whether he should kill or not, his writing style is mediocre, and he is inconsistent. There is no one else who can do this.
I said I hate pirates, but I couldn't kill anyone in a fight. Until it was released, I didn't see many pirates killed.
To be honest, I feel like there's really nothing to see.
I've been watching it for a long time. I didn't expect this or that when playing Rayleigh and Big Bear. Do you think of you?
I was given an invincible background, but the result was that I was jiggling all the way, as if I had Alzheimer's disease. He says he hates pirates, but in reality he is a peace lover who won't kill him. Summary: Keep your head down and don't watch.