In the Hunter World, the Zoldyck Family's Strongest Assassin!

I saved more than a hundred chapters and read them all at once. I don't think there is any need to write so much about Xiaojie. He is the male protagonist I hate the most in Japanese comics. He is willful and reckless. He can disregard the life and death of his companions and even relatives when he is willful. He has an inhuman outlook. Can't you see that he inherited Jin? Is it just his brain? Except for inheriting Jin's little cultivation talent, his brain is full of shit. Xiaojie looks more like a monster than a human being. Xiaojie's mother has never been mentioned at all, and the two fathers and sons have not mentioned her mother at all. It is possible that Xiaojie is the product of accidents in Jin's adventures. When I was young, I liked him very much. Now that I am in my early thirties, I always want to squeeze him to death when I look at him. Among the male protagonists of the royal manga, my favorite is Natsu. I have to say that Fairy Tail is the most spiritually beautiful work. As for the other ones, Naruto and Luffy are simply stupid. Bleach's Ichigo can barely do it. Dragon Ball's Goku can do it when he was a child and in Dragon Ball Z. In Dragon Ball Super, he has become just an idiot dominated by the desire to fight. Vegeta is much stronger than him.

Like the title, this is what I care about when I read a book

The protagonist is already 16 and only at level B. Although he can jump to the next level and challenge, the suppression is too harsh. According to Xiaojie's potential, the protagonist's hard work in the past few years would have already made him A. . The protagonist's potential is said to be so strong in the past, but it becomes weaker as the story goes on. .

I was angered by the chapter where the author wrote a chapter about a girl merging into a beast, and it really pissed me off.

The protagonist's thinking often wanders wildly. When he sees a scene, he says it looks familiar, and then describes the plot of the original work or other animations at length. In fact, it has nothing to do with the current content... Then there is the repetition. The scenes that have been described and the background that has been introduced are introduced again every ten or so chapters; for example, the concept of beating up enemies and receiving missions... It takes less than half a chapter to repeat;

The names of brothers are unique. The first and last names of the eldest brother and the second brother have the same homophonic characters, and the same pattern is followed until the last brother. Therefore, people who are not true fans usually insert brothers randomly in the family without paying attention.

How can you make a character like Saba, whose original system is even better than his own, have the fighting ability to become the protagonist? Even weaker than the capable ones. Why don't you punch a hungry wolf? Fanma? The strongest blood? Can't even turn the doorknob.

Killer Queen doesn't have the ability to partially explode and remain partially intact. The intact part is actually a bomb.

Isn't this putting the cart before the horse a bit? There are hundreds of chapters. It's time to make significant progress emotionally, right?

How should I put it? It's well written, but a bit boring. Damn it, I wrote more than 300 chapters and it's still a long way from the main plot. Gonggong is not as good as you.