Hogwarts: This Wizard Is a Little Unorthodox

I haven't confiscated a woman in more than 100 chapters, rnm will refund my money

Regarding the emotional issues with Hermione, if you are the heroine, write about it. Why are you so ambiguous if you are not the heroine? While you are talking to someone, you treat them like your sister. Do you want to talk about it or not?

In the original novel, I hate him very much and get jealous at every turn. It's just envy. After all, envy is a common thing. I just occasionally think about it, if that person is me... But jealousy… It's because you feel resentful because of someone else's kindness… Good guy, I would have been envious when I was a kid, but I would never resent others because of their kindness...

If the protagonist doesn't know it but the reader knows it, it will make the protagonist's various behaviors look stupid.

There is no main line! The growth of the male protagonist is rarely described, so what should I watch? I've read a lot of fandoms, and the so-called Eastern Taoist background is actually just a background! Except for the beginning and the end, there is no description at all, and the plot has no new ideas. The male protagonist is still a time traveler who doesn't know the plot, so what are you watching? What's the point?

There is no spark between the Chinese Taoist martial arts and the protagonist's Taoist beliefs and Western magic. They are all about a strange sense of alienation.

Fei Lu, you dare to destroy your memory, who are you killing?

Brothers, I was hit. Now everyone is dizzy. My whole body hurts as if someone had beaten me. I was given two days to rest. I can't even sit up.

What the hell, he doesn't have much strength, and his vision is still shallow. Just sign the contract randomly.

Why do you have to add Chinese elements when writing a Western fantasy? It seems too fragmented.