I'm the Protagonist in DanMachi

The book turmoil has become serious, what's wrong with Fei Lu now? In the end? In the past, the smell of the two-spined salamander was very strong, but now they are all filled with water, and the names are basically the same. Sometimes I think that what I clicked is a book. The writing is so bad that I want to cry, and the good writing at the beginning is all pigeons. When I search for it in the fandom, I can hardly find a few fanfics, all of which are based on the same people. I can't even understand the ability settings of different anime. Even if I go to other platforms to read novels, it is not easy to solve. Now all the online novels are competing for the worst, which is too uncomfortable.

He is also an old author, why do he always stick to the protagonist of the original time-travel work?

This novel is basically just a mistake where the original protagonist has the memory of Blue Star, that is, the body of the original protagonist is taken away. The name, appearance and even the body belong to the original protagonist. How do you think readers can get the idea that this is not just the memory of the original protagonist having Blue Star?

It's been a long time since I've seen such a wonderful Dicuo fanfic, especially the single female protagonist. I really like it. Unlike other Dicuos, it's like I've never seen a woman before. It sticks to Sword Princess and various women.

Saw Chapter 738 Let me summarize. The author did not make the plug-in fun. The cool point of this book is that the author set it on Bell's "Gou Dao". It was good in the first place, but there were too many women added, especially Freya's forcible addition, and the author started to collapse. It felt like he had given up on himself by adding Loki and Artemis*2. Judging from the titles of the subsequent chapters, there are probably more in the future. If the author can't grasp this kind of harem story, Next time, don't make so many ambiguous plots. What everyone likes to watch is that you just don't get into it. It's really boring if you add the operation of adding a backhand and being ridden like a horse. You must know that this is not the era of honest pornography in front of the Internet. If you add too many characters and the writing is not strong enough, don't touch it. In fact, I read this book in 2022. After reading more than 300 chapters, I decided to pick it up and wait to kill it now. I was half happy and half disappointed. It was still refreshing to read it again. The story is really good, but the follow-up plot of Freya went astray. I understand the degree of yandere of this character, but the problem is that the protagonist has too many hiding methods, and there is no need to appear in front of others. The trick is too simple. The most disappointing thing is the seven deadly sins that the author thinks are exquisite. The game is good, but it is crooked and not fun. Why should I recycle my previous game? Everything is a PY transaction between "my mother" and "godmother". You still want me to give up my power and try it again? Isn't it possible that the author wants to rush for thousands of chapters, giving up his power every thousand chapters and euphemistically calling it "nirvana"? You asked me to take on the role of Mr. Gou Dao Beier, who I have cultivated with great difficulty, and you just want to change the power system so simply? Why don't you start by telling me that Bell has gained invincible power and is now on the ground talking to the goddesses on a daily basis? What I want to see is the protagonist under the Xingyue system. This is not a mess. I want to criticize the author. Apart from giving power, this plug-in really has no sense of existence. There are more than 700 chapters. It only appears a few times in the front and a few times in the next few hundred chapters.

I want to read a long story about traveling to the wrong place, but I really can't find your book. It's even worse than the original author. It doesn't have as many harems as the original author. This one is really **

I don't want to chase you. The first few books were all about chasing you, just like eunuchs! Keep it

Big Lei doesn't have it, Xiao Lei keeps pointing out that it's not fun, a lot of mental descriptions, slow progress, etc. In Feilu, you have to at least adapt to Feilu's rhythm. Although I don't reject slow-paced writing, the premise is that it is comfortable to read. I have read a lot of well-written articles, but they are also slow. I like to talk about a bunch of useless settings, and then go from Tianhu to gg

The author's writing is getting worse and worse. If he fails to formulate a good idea, he should take time off to think carefully. Don't repeat meaningless words over and over again. If you delay the manuscript, it will be uncomfortable, and we will also feel uncomfortable reading it. I hope the author will pay more attention to this issue and reflect on it. Thanks.

This author is famous for his anecdotal writing style. It is too wordy and often misses the point. It is not as bland as ordinary writing, but really flat and straightforward, with a dull and watery feeling. Maybe some people like this kind of thing.