Playing the Occult in Persona

I ordered 120 chapters and haven't finished Kamoshida yet. I felt bad, so I waited until the author finished writing Kamoshida before subscribing. Sure enough, I cut it.

After reading the reviews, they said that the writing was more depressing than the original work, and the protagonist's character was also indecisive, so I decided not to read it. To be honest, playing P5 in the early stage was really frustrating. The school atmosphere was very depressing. In the later stage, after saving the world, I had to work for the government's face. Now it's even more frustrating (?_?)

The first few chapters are too boring. Those who have played it cannot capture the shock and weirdness of the original scenes. Those who have not played it feel even more confused, and it is too long.

... So, author, are you just a newcomer who just played the P5 Royal Edition? And why is it more depressing than the original? The plot of the original is already terrible, but yours is even more depressing than the original. I really can't believe that it was because the plot of the original was too outrageous, had too many loopholes, and had too many flaws that I stopped playing it, so why don't you come up with an enhanced version?

It's hard to criticize such depressing and slow-paced writing in a fast-paced era, right?

I hope the plot will progress a little faster, but it feels a bit slow now. The world view is still being slowly laid out after it is released, which makes it feel a bit watered down. But I'm very happy to see p5 fans, so come on, keep writing.

The writing is very good. There are few books that Fei Lu can read. Why did you suddenly get cut off?

It looks good, but I hope that the speed of conquering the palace will be a little faster. It seems that Lianlian has not obtained the second persona yet. He seems to have not discovered this ability of his. Now that the Velvet Room is out, will the guillotine be far away (*^_^*)

After reading ten chapters, I saw the protagonist sighing about his misfortune and smiling bitterly in every chapter. He was just like a Japanese high school student. It was annoying. Please don't change the settings since the protagonist is a reborn and then a high school student. And the great-grandmother, who knew that was the key, but ended up throwing her into the sewer after desperately trying to save her? What kind of currency speculation is this? Speechless.

I don't know anyone who is causing trouble in my comment area, but since I opened the book, some people have deliberately given me 2 points. The word ** is a 2-point vote for me right from the beginning. I don't even know what to say if it's not intentional. In addition, I can accept any objections to the stories I write. If you are deliberately looking for trouble, that is just looking for trouble out of nothing! Especially this Yae (●—●)] is a high-level account. I'm afraid I won't know that you are someone else's trumpet, right? I'll keep this comment at the top of the page. I still have some points for the story I wrote, so I won't let so many people criticize it. Today I saw a reader who recognized me and said that he stopped reading my book because of the comments, so I pinned this comment to the top.