
I'm Naruto, and I Sacrifice Asura from the Start
我是鸣人,开局献祭阿修罗
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.4M Words
- Genre
- Fanfiction
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Faloo
Synopsis
All-time: Reads, Flowers.
635Chapters
11.1MReads
1.4MFlowers
10.0Score
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Haruno Sakura is extremely talented. If Tsunade hadn't seen her persistence, there would have been no chance. As a disciple of Hokage, with the resources and support of the whole village, Tsunade devoted all her efforts to training, but this is the result? As the Senju Princess, Tsunade is both talented and talented, but she did not inherit Senju's talent. The two Senju brothers are simply bugs and scumbags. She is said to be a genius but she has gone her own way and is the pinnacle of medical ninjas. What talent does Haruno Sakura have? There's no shit, the back is all leftovers from Tsunade's fun, and he has nothing? Think about Naruto-Sasuke, Rasenshuriken, Senjutsu, Kirin, and Chidori-ryu in the same period. Which one doesn't develop his own technique that suits him? What's the point of the author forcing me to go away? You were told to keep a low profile earlier, now you start making waves? There's only one Kaguya, and he's going to beat the Six Paths with his head?
The author, Kakashi's father's name is Hatake Shisaku, not Hatake White Fang, White Fang is just his nickname, Konoha White Fang, that's not rigorous enough, give me a sperm to whip you
I sent several suggested comments, but none of them showed up. I don't know if the author has seen it. A few more words. We understand the author's intention to write this book well, but pursuing perfection too much will be counterproductive. At this stage, due to the protagonist's forced cheating, Naruto Village no longer has much potential. Konoha is destroyed, so there is no need to spend too much space on it. And now the author is a little unsure. From the moment the protagonist meets the leader of the three clans of Pig, Deer and Die, the author has made the same mistake as most other novels on Feilu, forcibly reducing his intelligence. The length of Naruto's story is bound to become too long to write, it's like chewing on a bone that has no flesh left. The final result is that the author is tired and the readers think you are useless. And for other worlds in the later period, the strength of the protagonist will inevitably be improved, causing the protagonist to become the brainless dragon Aotian in the later period. This is also the routine and shortcoming of most of the current Feilu novels. This book already shows signs of this. Remind the author, I hope the author can see it
At the beginning, he just let Hinata go because he was afraid of trouble. Instead, he was thinking about how to win over Sasuke. This is because he doesn't want a wife and wants gay friends. How many girls are there in this book? A harem or not?
Every time I read this novel, I feel a strong sense of hostility and resentment,**
I don't know why Itachi must die. If he dies, it will really be over. Wouldn't it be better to let Itachi spread his wings for Uchiha? Loot the property from Konoha, then find some girls, and let Itachi sow 10 people a day. If this happens, it won't take a few decades for the Uchiha to return.
I only became a jounin when I was 12 years old. Don't come to Feilu and talk about increasing your strength too soon and using up your potential~ Ridiculous
As a disciple of the Fourth Generation, knowing that Naruto is the son of the Fourth Generation, he has never given him any help since he was a child. Not to mention other things, at least it can prevent him from suffering so much abuse.
Didn't anyone talk about the three hundred and forty chapters? Naruto looked at Tsunade's body, and Minato must have seen it in his consciousness at that time. Isn't this green? , Could the author please explain? Did I miss something? If so, please tell me.
It's better to write about tutoring. The author's tutoring can be devoured.