Personality Projection, but It's Nikke

The idea was great, but it died.

Keep it up, author! By the way, the protagonist is actually Sancho Panza? Does that count as a second time travel?

Is anyone there?

I'll save this for later.

Save this post, keep it up! #(Cute)

Without a doubt, Niki's popularity is relatively small even among second-generation games. Hang another monthly plan The author's problem is the word count issue. A chapter with only three pages is far from enough. My suggestion is that each chapter should have at least 4,000 words. Secondly, the first three chapters are not engaging enough; they fail to retain readers and are short and weak. The content is messy and I can't understand it. I finished reading it, and I still couldn't figure out whether the main world of this book was in the city or in Niki. The content was too clichéd, like a trashy online novel from 10 years ago. I suggest you look at the opening paragraphs of other popular authors and improve them. And figuring out how to reach the word count for your article. The solution is to add more dialogue, descriptions of characters' expressions, objects and scenery, and detailed descriptions. Remember to double the word count. And remember to crush the red dancing shoes to dust. And we readers come to fanfiction to make up for our regrets. The Goddess Force can save them. Try to save those who can't be saved. Based on Dorothy's reaction after the protagonist takes over Pina's personality, it seems that at least after Lilith's death and Pina's execution... Dorothy's reaction wasn't strong enough; she should have been more insane, pressing a gun to the protagonist's face, strangling him, breaking his limbs, and then embracing him in mourning and repentance, treating him as Pina's reincarnation. As for why he couldn't beat Dorothy... They're like fairy tales, how can you compete with a mass-produced one? Although according to some official data, the mass-produced models from a century ago, during the Goddess Squad era, could also be upgraded and have their combat power improved, the numerical difference was still significant. That's about it for now, but I'm not expecting much from the plot. I just hope the word count can be higher.