
Witch Trial: My Lover Has Disappeared
魔女审判,我的恋人失踪了
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To be honest, the overall quality is actually much better than the AI-powered Gou Shi apps that are currently trending on the list with millions of clicks. However, the main problem is that the author completely disregarded the target audience and the intended readership. The first part, written from the male protagonist's perspective, discouraged yuri fans, and the subsequent disappearance of the male protagonist in the second volume discouraged the most mainstream yuri fans (I don't know how else to describe it). In short, very few people could even make it to the third volume, or even the middle of the second volume; they all gave up. Only a very small number of people who clicked with the story could finish reading it. As a self-indulgent work, it's quite excellent, but since it's completely free, it probably didn't consider commercial aspects. Anyway, apart from this, it's pretty good.
Boss, do people even read this kind of mystery writing?
Amazing, this episode was amazing! 😭 This review contains spoilers. I still want to see it. JPG In conclusion, this book is highly versatile and offers excellent strategic insights, making it suitable for readers who enjoy slice-of-life stories and intellectual battles (a rather strange combination). Overall, it's a strong contender for the top tier. Although the protagonist disappeared midway through the game, he played the role of the primary information provider throughout. Coco, on the other hand, seemed reborn (wiping away tears), remotely gathering information and immediately seeking cooperation with Heero. Shiro/Coco: Never before has there been such a wonderful start. I hereby declare: Cocoa is a dragon 🐉! Meruru is a district! And Neildoron is a dragon 🐉! This book's Hero is a rare true Yamato Nadeshiko, not a mysterious and repressed woman, not a mysterious and breathless old woman, but the legendary Yamato Nadeshiko (choking up). I'm saying the male lead suppressing the witch's transformation is the underlying logic of the "Demon Judgement" male lead novel, does anyone understand? When Hiro heard from Coco that her boyfriend was traveling all over the country (seriously!), She gathered all the information, and suddenly her nails stopped growing, she stopped using her fire poker, and she stopped breathing. Based on the role the male lead played and his long-term efforts, I'd believe Hiro would directly pair him up with someone else someday (appreciation). So that explains why, in your first playthrough, Hiro was still under the spell of the witch factor and forgot you had a boyfriend who was outside carrying a fire poker and just gave it to you. What will become of us Yamato Nadeshiko (choking up)? (Choking up) Compared to other Judgment novels, what's outrageous about this one is that the author actually created an original case in the third volume, and then created a group chat for people to promote it. There's a reward for getting it published (the author gives out a standee), and a punishment for not getting it published (referring to mockery). According to the author, about 25% of the predictions were correct before the group even started. I'm so sorry I didn't get the author to use their full strength (sigh). Just kidding. After joining the group and guessing, I came up with two key pieces of evidence. Combining them with the plausible arguments of the other group members, I'm going to win big! The Black Death (chapter title), I'll probably never forget you for the rest of my life (laughs). So what's this about the key evidence being released only on July 3rd, but we guessed it on July 1st (keeping an eye on it)? The author is Qu In addition, the author has a large backlog of manuscripts, at least two more volumes: one covering the remaining plot of Witch Island, and one set in a school. The sixth volume is pending, and the author also intends to write a side story. Hehe, I've seriously recommended this yandere (obsessive/sweet) story to the author. I'm eagerly awaiting and anticipating the future of the Asian-American Hero fandom! 😋 And the author is a dragon 🐉😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 The kids have written 300,000 words, 120 chapters, 4 book reviews, and 29 posts 😭 And he's already finished the fourth volume 😭😭😭😭 He hasn't even signed a contract yet 😭😭😭😭😭 Oh, soul, come back! 😭😭😭 More people, please! 😭😭😭 Why is no one watching such a good mystery? 😭😭😭
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This is the answer post; those who want to deduce the answer themselves should not read it.
After the group discussion reached a conclusion, I was recommended to speak in the comments section. The generals' skill in battle is not my achievement. Explain according to the 5W1H principle What: fabricating a "fake S incident" Why: To deceive the warden and the humans, mislead them into believing that Meruru was dead, cause chaos, and carry out the witch's funeral ceremony. Who: Except for Meruru, Emma and the rest are accomplices. Emma is from the reader's perspective and is the main naive and innocent figure who deceives people. Meruru faked her death. The organizers are Heero and Hannah, and Sherry was most likely the one who carried out the act. Where: Reception room, art studio, courtyard, guesthouse When: Rain in front of the desk Set fire around 2:20 Around 2:30, Emma checked on Meruru's situation. The owl in the courtyard cleared the sky and the rain stopped. Emma and Shiro went to put out the fire. 2:30-2:50 Meruru Incident Occurs 2:50 Emma discovers that Meruru is in trouble. The body went missing between 3:00 and 6:00 (estimated to be 4:00). 6:00 AM: Case of missing body discovered How: In the morning, under the pretext of a birthday party, Nuoan used ribbons and other items to cover any potential cameras. After the birthday party, An An used "brainwashing" to make Meruru go to the reception room to make a birthday present; Noah and An An went to the art studio, while Milia and Arisa went to the lakeside first. Milia used "soul swapping," and Arisa's soul was now in Milia's body. Then, "Milia" went to the guesthouse, while "Arisa" stayed by the lakeside; Cocoa's whereabouts are unknown. In the afternoon, Noah used "liquid manipulation" to control the water in the fountain, creating a rain that only fell in the courtyard, thus creating the conditions for a locked room. Hannah, Sherry, and Magrea went to the changing room, and Sherry changed into a dress with Hannah's hair sewn on it. Emma took a walk and then went with Heero, while the guard waited in the entrance hall. At this point, everyone had an alibi for each other. Before 2:20, Noah triggered "clairvoyance" by placing a Coco doll on the third floor of the atrium, telling Coco that the rain was about to stop. Coco then likely notified "Milia" to start the fire by making a phone call but hanging up immediately. Around 2:20, "Milia" set fire to three guesthouses. Sherry used Hannah's "levitation" to travel through the burning pipes to the second-floor studio, while Rhea went to the north gate of the courtyard to wait. Around 2:30, Mag used "Imitation" to silence Meruru's phone notification sound, preventing Meruru from going to put out the fire. Between 2:30 and 2:50, Sherry flew from the second-floor balcony to the first-floor reception room window. After opening the window, Rhea used "Visual Guidance" to fix Meruru's gaze on the flower basket. At the same time, Mag silenced the sound (possibly due to the seating arrangement in the reception room, Meruru was naturally facing away from the window). Sherry then knocked Meruru unconscious and used a bottle containing sleeping pills (number 13) to feed Meruru the pills, ensuring that Meruru would not wake up. Mag used Meruru's phone to create a fake recording, and then everyone evacuated. At 2:50, the Meruru incident occurred. At 3:00, Emma was taken to the solitary confinement room, and everyone went to visit her. During this time, "Milia" and "Arisa" switched back. Around 4:00 AM, the guard's security camera was destroyed by Nanoha. Nanoha used emotional appeals while Anan used "brainwashing" on the guards. The body was then sent to a place the warden couldn't find. At 6:00, the trial began, and Emma's false testimony led to Meruru's suicide and the case being closed. Some tidbits: Regarding "the place the warden can't find," based on the author's quirky sense of humor, we have reason to suspect that Meruru is hidden in the large pot in the kitchen, bubbling under the fire. Ironically, the author simply admits to this, while being surprised that we are not surprised by this fact, which is quite amusing. At the same time, there are also fake medicines such as Meruru under the ground, Meruru in a safe, and Meruru in a steamer. Regarding the "twists and turns of reasoning," we jokingly proposed this idea on June 26th, long before the author acknowledged the "isolated Emma" theory on July 1st. However, it was abandoned due to its excessive morbidity and unclear motive. We also proposed other theories, such as the Tachibana-Yuki alliance, the Truth Group alliance, Tsukishiro Yuki's suicide order during a mental breakdown, Meruru's repentance and suicide, the four-person group in the changing room alliance, the Information Group alliance, Mag's betrayal and solo attack, and Heero's rewrite theory. All of these were eventually rejected until a new member joined the group and offered an unexpected motive. Regarding "Emma's false testimony," this is a highlight of Volume 3, no less significant than the transformation of Heero's false testimony of "I believe everyone" in the second playthrough into Heero's genuine "I believe everyone" in the third playthrough. Emma's false testimony is the result of Heero's sincerity in exchanging sincerity for sincerity in Volume 2. This leads Emma to realize that everyone has been deceiving her, and instead of breathing on them, she trusts them and prepares to question them after the trial. Whether Heero, who incorporated this into his plan to make Emma realize this herself, was aware of it remains to be seen. Regarding the "malicious author," the author gives a spoiler every day. When discussing the role of evidence zero, I guessed that Meruru didn't have any dolls on her body during the autopsy, so I thought the remains weren't Meruru's. At this point, the author gave a small spoiler and coded a three-character position, so the reasoning was always led to a fake remains. However, I didn't expect that what we thought was "Meruru" was actually "—you," which made me immediately confront the author. The author just said, "Just kidding."
I'm almost finished with the Oath chapter so far. While most of it follows the original plot, the way the death flag was avoided is handled very well. However, I thought Coco's abilities could be used to interpret things from a certain perspective and communicate with the male protagonist, but that didn't happen, which is a bit of a disappointment. Also, the male protagonist's storyline is a bit short. But then again, since I haven't finished reading it, this dual-perspective approach—completing one side's events first, then the two characters reuniting in the middle, and finally showing how they came to the same conclusion through various means—feels pretty good. Overall, it's a very interesting fanfic! It's a pity I don't have enough words, otherwise I was planning to write a longer review. Keep up the good work, author!
Is the author deliberately obscene by not adding the "Witch Trial" tag? #(Cute)
Not enough to eat! (Crying)
Let's raise it for a while first (you know what I mean).
Volume 5 has too much of an AI feel to it; the earlier volumes were alright.