Wuxia MyGO: Seeking Home, a Broken Kite

It's almost 500,000 words long, and the plot hasn't progressed in more than two months. Ai hope has a connection, but it feels too forced in the early stages. Ai Deng is a familiar stranger, and Ai Su has just learned about her past. Do Ai Mao and Ai Niang even know each other? Can Ai Yin participate in the arena or help Deng participate to create some connection? Otherwise, it feels like they can't form MYGO to participate in the martial arts tournament. This book still has a promising future. #(Acting cute)

The biggest problem right now is that the plot involving Aine is riddled with plot holes. The author seems to have made Aine a weak character for the sake of being weak. First, he didn't seriously consider Aine's profession in the story, or he was just using stereotypes. To draw an analogy, Aine's profession is similar to a mechanic in real life; have you ever seen a mechanic who's completely incapable of fighting? She just hasn't trained, not that she can't fight. Secondly, I don't think Aine used anything like "qi" much in the show. I'd like to ask the author why. In a place where everyone knows about "qi," why didn't Aine use it? Furthermore, Aine's profession requires something like "qi" to enhance physical and mental abilities. She also took a similar exam in the show; she couldn't possibly be unaware of the standards. Frankly, if she didn't meet the standards, why would she even bother? Based on the plot's setting, Aine is at least on par with Riki in terms of strength, but she might not be as good as Riki in terms of fighting ability.

I think the author should increase Aine's combat power.

Having followed the story through, my biggest takeaway is that the author should have focused more on Aine. Since Aine is the main character, at least develop her character properly. Since the story is told from her perspective, don't try to shift it to someone else's. One more thing, since this is a Mygo fanfic, please don't only include C-group and exclude Mygo. #(Funny)#(funny)#(funny)#(funny)#(funny)

Here it is! I love the martial arts style of mygo the most! More, I love watching.

The most disgusting character in this book is Li hope. She wrongly accuses the protagonist at the beginning, and the author even uses the protagonist as a stepping stone for her. Later, in order to whitewash her, the author puts the protagonist in a crisis. The biggest problem with this book is the various plot points the author designed to maintain the character of Li hope.

I feel like the author hasn't thought of this at all. The protagonist can suffer setbacks and be lectured, but she must win back and get her revenge. Instead of watching a bunch of people in the story showing off, acting cool, and playing heroes, while the protagonist stands there clapping and cheering. And stop writing your ridiculous ensemble drama; focus on writing the main character's story first.

Wuxia is not bad

Are there any couples like Ai Xiang, Ai Su, and Xiang Mu?

Is the author a fan or a hater?