Is This Chat Group Actually a Harem App?
聊天群原来是后宫软件吗？
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What I want to see is the protagonist beating up the villain and winning with shouts of love and justice, not me wallowing in self-pity when nothing is happening—that's meaningless.
Is this enough of a power-up? A High School DxD character like White Dragon Emperor and Sigurd from Type-Moon should at least have a power-up that allows for growth, right?
War! War! War! With the power of the White Dragon Emperor and the Dragon Slayer, how could we not fight! Herrschers! War! Durandal, the strongest Valkyrie of Destiny! Battle! The strongest of the previous civilization! The Brahma Beast Chimera! The Mandate of Salvation! Halfway to the End?! The strongest being in the world! Then we must fight him!! How could I not be delighted by so many masters? I'm so excited I could practically rip the flag open!
It's a bit pretentious. There's too much internal monologue, making it seem verbose. Is the protagonist actually trying to fight monsters and get stronger? What I feel like now is almost entirely internal monologue; there are very few monsters being fought, and the plot doesn't seem to be progressing at all. It's already over 200,000 words. Other Honkai Impact 3rd novels might already be talking to Kevin by now, but this one is still full of bitterness and resentment. However, the author's writing is still quite good, and the characters are well-developed. Keep up the good work, author!
Firstly, I felt there was too much psychological description. Secondly, the protagonist's role wasn't very prominent. Although it was clearly stated that the protagonist was constantly receiving buffs... The protagonist only actually fought once at the beginning. After that, it was mostly about describing the protagonist's sadness and such. Personally, I feel there could be less focus on inner thoughts and more on actual actions, giving the protagonist more screen time and allowing them to fight personally instead of just having their friends do the work.
There's too much psychological description, it's a bit too artsy, and the dialogue is too long. I hope the psychological descriptions can be more concise, and the parts about the artsy type can be even shorter. Then, since the protagonist already has this personality, why not just add an Ultraman? Judging from the protagonist's personality, Nexus would be quite good. It perfectly matches the protagonist's personality. Anyway, I feel that adding Ultraman wouldn't be a big problem given the protagonist's evolution path later on.
Why so much internal monologue? Isn't that a bit too melodramatic? #(Angry)#(Angry)
My buddy has some lewd pictures, they're real.
Is this character Lin Daiyu? She's so pretentious.
After subscribing, I found the plot unclear and disjointed, making it difficult to understand. Could you please provide a more coherent outline? The premise seemed promising, but it's just... Indescribable.