Warhammer: The Holy Blood Archangel Girl

Oh no, Mother Angel has arrived! Dante is devastated!

The writing is too stiff, the paragraph breaks are poorly done, it doesn't cut corners where it should, and it lacks the Warhammer feel, making it a painful read.

By the God-Emperor, this must be a conspiracy by Tzeentch! #(Laughs)

As a newbie, I feel the plot transitions are a bit abrupt. Take your time. Also, 🦔🐱, is there something wrong with this book? Why can't I add it to my bookshelf?

The feeling is vague (not that vagueness is bad), the protagonist's combat power is modular (normal, a crushing victory), the governance of the nest city is vague, the direction is vague (leaning towards farming or combat, it feels like the author wanted to use farming after unification to show the angels' kindness, but in practice it seems like they can't write how to innovate). In short, it looks average, but not bad; it's pleasing to the eye and makes you want to keep watching.

Mark this post, update soon!

The writing style is very stiff.

So far, it's very peaceful. The most memorable part of the whole book is Mother Heaven, and that's about it.

The traffic would probably be better if the cover art were changed to an anime character, Saintess.

Handmade Archangel brand meat sauce, and even canned wontons are highly praised.