The Violent Witch of Gryffindor

Being one step ahead is genius, being ten steps ahead is madness. Author, just how far have your eyes seen?

Frog Fun, 10% off

You're not allowed to look at the ones that are 90% off; I bought them at full price! #(Crying)

At a price of 3.5 yuan (10% off), I'll have to taste it to see if it's salty or bland.

One-tenth off? I'm intrigued.

This was the first Harry Potter fanfiction I read a while ago, and overall it was pretty good. The romance between the three main characters, Fou and Hermione, was very well-written and sweet, with a detailed account of their meeting and falling in love. Hermione's story was average; it felt like a gradual development of feelings over time. Luna was less compelling. There was little initial interest or interaction, and then suddenly she fell for me—it felt abrupt. She didn't even have as much screen time as Ginny, who I remember also had feelings for Harry, but nothing came of it. I haven't read the original books, so I won't comment on the other parts. There wasn't much angst or major plot holes. If you like this genre, you might want to check it out.

Perhaps you wrote very well. But I'm sorry, your spellcasting is so bad it's unbearable to watch.

Harley Strong

Wait a minute, he didn't even talk to Ron at the beginning, so how did he suddenly join Harley's group?

How far did the author actually see? (Tears)