Uma Musume: Do You Even Know What a Phantom Is?

After reading tens of thousands of words, I realized that the exciting and satisfying moments weren't written out, and a bunch of other ideas were added in, resulting in a disjointed and chaotic piecemeal style that left me feeling frustrated and unable to express myself.

Thoughts late at night Thank you all for your continued support. This is truly a record I've broken! My previous novel on Tomato only had 800,000 words, but this one, which I started writing as a trial because other Uma Musume novels updated too slowly, has already reached over 1.2 Million words. I really didn't expect to keep going. Maybe it's because I don't want to be accused of abandoning the project? Haha~ I've read both the book reviews and the paragraph comments, and I know that the "ambiguous single" aspect is the most controversial part. This is indeed my problem. I've always felt that ambiguity doesn't necessarily mean being together. I've always felt that the ambiguity I've described is the same as the confusion of adolescence, probably due to my own experiences in junior and senior high school. I mistook a confused relationship for love, which ended hastily and messily. Moreover, due to some special events, I'm now somewhat afraid of love. Therefore, my current definition and description of love tend to lean more towards my idealized version, so what I write might be a bit exaggerated. Ultimately, it all comes down to my own issues. It's strange that when everyone else thinks it's over, only I think it's fine. So, the ambiguous parts won't be completely resolved when they appear in the main world or during overseas expeditions. Ireland, the United States… and other possible fantasy free-roaming variants that may follow—not all of them adhere to the single-person setting. Because parallel worlds are essentially different versions of ourselves in other universes; if they were all the same, it would be too boring. I've also fantasized about what would happen if parallel universes truly existed—would my other self have a completely different personality? A worse personality, or a more cheerful personality, or an extreme personality…etc. Wouldn't more diverse fantasy free-roaming be more interesting? P. S.: I'm really curious to see what kind of life I would lead if I were the complete opposite of myself. Finally: I will definitely keep writing this book, whether it's about the game Uma Musume Pretty Derby or real-world horse racing stories. I haven't found anything that consistently interests me like this in a long time. Thank you for reading this far. Good morning, good afternoon, and good night! P. S.: Although I haven't created a book group, you can follow me, Ryougu Yu, on Douyin 🥰 (Does this count as me promoting myself? ☝️🤓)

The plot of "The Emperor" completely poisoned me. The Ulala from the story world, the version with 113 wins and 113 losses, ran away from the story world to reality and gave her abilities to the real-world Ulala. Ulala was overjoyed and wanted to share this happiness with her most beloved president, so she went to challenge the braised tofu to a competition and then utterly defeated the braised tofu. Everyone knows how strong Wulala is. When Lu Doufu was completely outmatched, he suspected that Wulala had eaten something she shouldn't have and wanted to take Chunli to the hospital. Ulala explained that another version of herself told her that it could unleash her potential, but Lu Doufu didn't believe her and went to the hospital for a checkup. She said something a bit out of character, something about still talking nonsense. Then at this point, the 113-win version of Ulala couldn't sit still anymore and started calling himself the CS Emperor. I honestly couldn't hold back anymore. Yes, I couldn't hold back again. I'm saying, no matter who the emperor is, he wouldn't believe Ulala's story. The author's description of the emperor prioritizing calling a car to go to the hospital with Ulala clearly shows his concern and responsibility. Then the author goes back and adds a line about the emperor in CS, hahaha. I browsed through the book reviews and found that no one had mentioned this issue. Am I being too sensitive? I couldn't hold back.

I really want to marry Zizai! 😋😋 She'll support me through her competitions, and I'll stay home playing video games. Someone as competitive as her definitely won't give up the competitions, hehe 😋😋 That way I can keep spending Zizai's money. When she goes to her competitions, I'll drag Zizai's legs to stop her from leaving, making her kick me with her little feet 😋😋😋😋 But she can't kick me, so I can only fiercely call her a pervert in my childish voice. Zizai was about to be late for the competition, but could only anxiously bang her little head with her hands. Zizai 😋…hehe 😋😋 …Zizai…hehe 😋😋…hehe

In ancient times, horses and humans determined who would jump by racing. Initially, humans could win long-distance endurance races to prevent jumping. However, gradually, horses began to surpass humans in long-distance races, causing immense suffering for the men in human tribes and great sorrow for the women whose husbands were taken away by oxen. But the appearance of a certain human brought hope. He taught humans better running techniques and training methods, and also taught them to cultivate a certain crop to suppress the horses' jumping instincts. However, this didn't last long. The three goddesses of the heavens learned of this and captured the human, attempting to force him to stop this anti-horse behavior. The human refused to yield, but after being battling the three goddesses for seven days and seven nights, his pelvis shattered, he was confined to a wheelchair and forced to stop. Initially, some people objected, but after being captured by the horses during a night raid and returning, they no longer objected. Thus, with no improvement in running techniques and training methods, humans gradually lost the ability to defeat the horses and became their tools. For a long period, horses held a high status; their decline only began after leaving ancient times.

Chun Wula Lala is gone too. The beautiful cherry blossoms eventually fell in autumn.

Why don't you just write about your virtual space instead of the main storyline?

Regarding their claim that the transition between virtual and reality is chaotic, I didn't see it that way. However, the update speed is indeed worrying. If you had already written 800,000 words and updated once a day, I could accept it. But since it's been updated once a day since its release and there are only 600,000 words left, I can only say that it needs to be put on hold.

It looks very chaotic. It was okay at the beginning, but it got increasingly chaotic after we got to the center. The scenes switched frequently between the virtual and real worlds, making it look very messy.

Are you perhaps the same person as Da Ming Da Fang? How come he stopped updating, and you stopped too? #(Question mark)