Tracen’s Five Horses: Are You Tearing Me Apart?

This new plot is outrageous! If you're not going to create something interesting, why not at least do something more entertaining like horse jumping around? Are you trying to kill them both with this lousy storyline?

I was a loading apprentice, and I've been reborn! In my previous life, I finished writing "Five Horses Tear Me Apart," a novel with over 1000 chapters. It was concise and engaging, full of fun competitions and delightful interactions, and was widely loved by readers in the industry. However, this book also left me creatively exhausted, with no inspiration or motivation to write anything more. I never expected to get a system after my rebirth! Let me see what the system's name is. What?! The School Beauty's Personal Bodyguard System! Does this mean my daily life is about to take off? Let me see what's going on. Hmm... What does it mean that as long as I write a book as drawn out as The School Beauty's Personal Bodyguard, I can get a daily minimum allowance of money as a system reward? What's the use of this system? Wait a minute! I can make this "Five Horses Tear Me Apart" even more drawn out and even more drawn out. Hehehe, I don't have to use my brain too much, I still get some money, and I can annoy those readers who want to see the horse racer interactions. Hey, I'll just drag it out, I won't add those popular horse racer scenes, what can the readers do to me? I can still get rewards every day by dragging it out with the system. Hehehe #(evil laugh)#(kira)

I've been raising it for half a year now. I'd like to ask you all, has the main character had any sex yet?

Why not CCB? That's harder than getting the author to earn a billion dollars! #(Laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)#(laughing and crying)

Writing slice-of-life scenes is fine, but writing it so weakly and making the protagonist look like a mentally challenged overgrown child—are you even human? #(Blue and sad)#(Blue and sad)

I feel like I'm trapped in a time loop. Messages like "changing houses," "getting a driver's license," and "Sirius is awesome" keep appearing on my phone, but my money is disappearing.

It's so padded out, I have absolutely no desire to continue reading. Every time I thought they were going to develop a romance, it just kept adding more and more filler. It's giving me hyponatremia. Not to mention that each match scene takes at least five chapters, after reading hundreds of chapters, I tried to recall the plot but found I'd forgotten everything from before. My brain automatically washed away the plot along with the padded words.

Stop writing that Mary Sue stuff. People are here for novel training techniques and tactics, what's the point of keeping writing about this fly? The protagonist's horse is dead, right? It knows everything but keeps suppressing information and doesn't care. Showing off and face-slapping scenes were appropriate in the first half of the book, but now that it's over three million words into the later stages, it's time to show off. As for domestic news and sports, everyone knows that, you don't need to emphasize it here. Just be direct, like with the Japanese industry earlier, don't waste time and energy on annoying people. People pay to read for entertainment, not to read history.

It's dragging on and on, with little substance or content that readers want to see. After a day or two, the update is only a few pages long, mostly describing a random random horse girl, then a chapter or two of filler and it's over. I followed this book from the previous one, updating daily. Honestly, at this rate, I really need to control you.

The plot is currently both padded and terrible. The early characters like Tamamo and Oguri are practically nonexistent, and the irrelevant foreign female characters' speculations about the protagonist have been dragged out chapter after chapter. It feels like the author is treating the audience like idiots. You might as well have written some fanfiction about romantic rivalries and power struggles; at least that would have been more interesting.