Bringing My Shooting Talent to Kivotos

The book has been deleted. If the author apologizes and makes changes, please kick me out. If the author continues to delete tags and control comments, please also remind them.

LDM, I've noticed that stories with vague romantic subplots and unclear protagonist motivations tend to accelerate wildly towards the end, with characters symbolically achieving a few things, then the author happily cashes in on the earlier filler content and leaves. These authors also like to lure you in with seemingly appealing promises in the early stages, only to visibly drop in quality after exhausting their inspiration in the second volume. Oh, and by the way, if your story fits these characteristics, check if your first and second volumes have passed CCB (Certified Public Accounts) approval. If not, you can just run away! #(Haha)

Rereading the book after some time... It's still the same. When you first caused the uproar, you took a few days off to figure out how to continue, and we wouldn't blame you for that. You kept writing despite the difficulties, and the result is still so weak. This shows that your initial apology didn't address the problem at all. After all, I read your apology as soon as it came out. Just the joke and Rion's handling of the situation were only the triggers for readers' dissatisfaction. What truly angered readers was the weak, extremely weak, previous plot. The plot was still like a survival game, unable to escape the storyline. Alice was still captured, and Rion still ran away. Some might say it's normal for the protagonist to be unaware of the original plot and unable to react in time, but didn't the author know that? Ultimately, it shows a lack of creative ability to break free from the game's plot; it's just a repetitive reading. But then why read fanfiction? Why not just read the game's plot? There have also been many complaints about the character's development. It's not like no one has raised the issue; they just don't watch. Initially, the setting felt novel, but the lack of significant changes afterward is a bit much. I don't see the qualities of an adult working in a high-pressure club like this character. Instead, I see someone who acts like a very young child, unintelligent, acting on a whim, and failing to distinguish between reality and the game, unable to prioritize. Alice is captured, yet he wanders around, ignoring the fact that besides the president, there's also Saintia who needs to be contacted. Aren't these characteristics just childish? That's why I was so angry. I even trusted the author before because of their reputation, and I was concerned about their work schedule. Now I just can't believe it's written like this. I'm even starting to wonder if the author used AI like Tomato did? So I posted the above thoughts for others to refer to.

The protagonist is like a fool, but of course, how the protagonist is depends on the author who writes him.

I'm almost completely disappointed with cat-themed fanfics. Aside from the final chapter and a few others, the main plot of cat-themed fanfics is mostly nonsensical, and none of the hedgehog cat fanfics have a happy ending.

So what exactly did you change? Did you save your outline or just give up? Those punches felt more like an outburst of impotent rage than punishment! Did you find the later parts of *Millennium* exciting? Maybe some people did, but I was already bored. The only reason I kept reading was to see what kind of punishment Rion would receive for saving Alice, and now you've told me she just ran away. This has nothing to do with compensation, don't you understand? Why can't she face her mistakes? Because she thinks she can create greater value? Then tell me, what was the protagonist's suffering all this time for? Just to save Alice? What about the other students who suffered the consequences? All of this was caused by Rion's stubbornness, and she didn't even apologize to them in person before disappearing. How do you expect the readers to accept this?

I've caught up to the latest chapter, and to be honest, I can clearly feel that the author isn't as interested in writing seriously as before. I didn't get tired of "Supervisor's" even after three readings, but each subsequent book is more and more bland, especially "Prevention Manual" by Dian. I've finished reading all of Tata's other books, but I have absolutely no interest in continuing with that one. Before, even writing about mundane daily life was interesting to read, but now all I can say is that it's just bland. #(You know what I mean)

The average number of comments per chapter has dropped by at least half, maybe even more. I think you're really obsessed with Super Robots. Honestly, what is Getter Robo? You could bring out a Bt from Titanfall and it would be fine, but honestly, not many people watch Super Robots. Gundam is more famous than this, right? The one I've heard of the most is Gurren Lagann, but the ending made me feel terrible...

The number of book reviews at the end of Volume 2 has visibly decreased.

Controlling comments feels so good!