The Fairies' Alchemist

No, these days even Hedgehog Cat writes original fantasy novels, bro! The writing style is quite good, but the pacing is a bit immature, probably because the author is a newcomer. Overall, however, the author has great potential and is worth looking forward to. If this book doesn't do well in the future, please give me a piece of your mind: byd wrote original content

The goods are too pure, bro; this is top-tier harem stuff.

Hmm... In terms of personal taste: the quality of the food is average. As I read more and more novels, the quality of Hedgehog Cat's novels has become increasingly unacceptable (probably because I'm tired of reading them). The review probably has a tiny bit of the original novel's flavor... (As pure as ever). I watched the fight for a while, and it got a bit irritating. I'd like to see more descriptive vocabulary, instead of just three or four "suddenly" phrases used to describe speed in a few paragraphs... (This is just my personal opinion, it's not a series of parallel sentences). It's rated as something you can skim through if you ignore the descriptive parts. Another point is that it's at least better than many of the weekly click rankings, but only slightly better. This commentary represents only the author's personal opinion.

Reading progress at comment time: 135/135 The male protagonist's origins and the female protagonists' (or perhaps others'?) Identities are never explained, but the overall handling is excellent. It feels like the first chapter originally had a hundred or two hundred chapters of his rise to power, which were then cut short, fast-forwarding to his invincible state. To reiterate, this isn't a flaw but a strength of the book; the well-placed stepping stones make the male protagonist's strength feel natural and satisfying, skipping over the hardships and jumping straight into the thrill. The downside is, what's going on in this recent part of the story? Three inexplicable female supporting characters were suddenly introduced, giving it a rambling, disjointed feel. There's absolutely no interconnected plot development. It can't be that they changed writers/rewrote the outline and ruined it, or perhaps the author only planned a short story and never had a long-term outline to begin with.

Creating original content is no easy feat! #(Dizzy)#(shy)

The goods are so pure, it's making my heart swell with lust! #(Laughs) It feels like all the female cultivators in this world are infatuated women.

The biggest problem is in the Oborozuki Holy Land. Huan Qing is simply insane, which greatly affects the viewing experience. If she were a virgin and kept as a mistress, the viewing experience would be much better. Especially the truth about the Poison Dragon Cult revealed later on—the level of that cult... Normally, no one would even consider fighting them. Even if they did, they'd probably try to unite with other sects to see if they had the resources of an upper-realm patriarch to destroy the Dark God's consciousness. And this first dungeon took way too long #(laughing and crying), it took over a hundred pages to finish.

Great! The emotions are quite delicate, each character is well-developed, the villains are also very compelling, and the fairies are all very well portrayed! #(Funny) Could you add more older fairies, like Song Yue and Zhu Linglong? This fantasy version would be over 100% good! I support it!

It's well written, but the conversion rate part challenges my values and is hard to accept in a short time.

Dude, is this writing style from Hedgehog Cat?