Honkai's Thousand Laws: Abducting Kiana at the Start

This is the only readable Honkai Impact 3rd fanfic.

I can't hold back anymore, bro! I started reading this book before I even started high school, and you're still not finished by the time I'm almost done with it.

Of all these fanfictions, this is the only one that I feel is inferior to the original work. Kiana would be much better off without the jinx protagonist, Kiana. The only purpose of this protagonist is to torment people.

Pure torture. The protagonist's actions are even worse than in the original story. The protagonist is a vortex, sucking everyone into it.

Hardship is unnecessary. If hardship is artificially introduced, isn't that subjective harm? Objectively generated hardship is indeed a touchstone for love, but if one blindly pursues the test of fidelity while ignoring the essence of love and artificially creates hardship, then one is merely making the beloved prove their loyalty by leaving them scarred. #(Panties)

I read it in high school, and now I'm a senior in college and it's still not finished...

It's a bit speechless. The plot twists seem to happen for the sake of twists, and the character settings are constantly changing. I bet even the author doesn't know what they're writing.

Good ending, good ending, good ending! Don't abandon me, don't abandon me, don't abandon me! Don't run away, don't run away, don't run away! I won't betray you, I won't betray you! I love you, I love you, I love you! Write it quickly, write it quickly! I will always stalk you, I will always stalk you, I will always stalk you!

Will this ever end? #(So sad)

The protagonist's character development and the plot are both quite good; personally, I thought it was pretty good. However, there's one small problem: the protagonist's power level is ridiculously high. This is the most terrifying aspect. Although I haven't read much, I feel the author's later writing falls apart because of this. After all, the protagonist's main strength is lifespan. After solving the lifespan problem, this lifespan-based solution is incredibly powerful, since it's directly and forcibly bound to an imaginary number. Since the disease is later transferred to the imaginary number, meaning it becomes a negative number, this infinite lifespan is essentially the same. Another issue is that all my personal concerns are time-related. After all, directly elevating the main character to Kevin's level is ridiculous; Kaiwei's strength is self-evident, a direct upgrade to a whole new level is simply too overpowered. Personally, I feel he's at most around the level of Xin Yan, so I think that's also incredibly powerful. At most, that's about the level. That's my feeling. If you feel anything is off, please comment. These are the two main issues I see. I haven't read much of the later parts, and at the time, I was basically only working on this book for a short time. So, personally, I feel these are the main issues. I think this is a problem that needs to be addressed; if not handled properly, it will be truly overpowered.