From This Moment On, I Bestow My Blessings Upon Azur Lane

@{"Reader_id":"23433907","reader_name":""} This book has several female protagonists.

I felt something was off starting around chapter 180. It wasn't sudden, but rather a gradual unease that reached a point where it had to be addressed. Compared to other Kantai Collection fanfiction, this one has the advantage of having a few more battle scenes, though not many, but it's still better than other terrible works, hmm. It's too straightforward. The protagonist's conversations about ship girls, especially the more private discussions about winning ship drops, feel a bit off to me. For example, the conversation between the protagonist and Enterprise in chapter 192: "Come on, there's something wrong with your thinking." Su Hao said helplessly, "Besides fighting, you have no value? Even a bomb wouldn't think like that. Besides fighting, don't you have many companions? You still have York City. You don't want all that friendship? You've never even tried shopping like this. It's such a shame to say something like that." #(You know what I mean) It's not that this part is unacceptable. If someone said this to me, my first reaction would definitely be resistance, because they were negating everything I had done before. Secondly, the wording is fine, but it could be better. With 2 million words, it's impossible to expect every chapter to be at the right level. It's just that compared to the beginning, the pacing and dialogue are a bit rough now. Of course, there's no need to bring these things up and disturb everyone's mood. The author mentioned in a post that the protagonist didn't consider the safety of his ship girls when he was captured and taken to Sakura Empire, so we won't go into that now. After waking up from being knocked unconscious by Rei, the protagonist mentioned Rei. However, I personally believe that since he could understand it so easily, he must have had similar guesses. But no, the protagonist was completely considering Rei as harmless. This isn't about specific matters, but rather a style of doing things. For example, if you've just fought with Sakura Empire, a Sakura Empire ship girl might run to your port, stay there for a long time, and then not call you "Commander" or have a heart-to-heart talk with you. Unlike other ship girl novels, yours has factions, more than two, which is inappropriate because it's abnormal. It's abnormal for the ship girls to lack a sense of crisis and be less vigilant. The author wrote about Richelieu's doubts about Ayanami, and I believe the author must have thought of it, but this foreshadowing was not revealed until the incident was over. Or to put it more bluntly, Richelieu did not make the protagonist wary of Ayanami. Why? Because the setting involves multiple factions, for example, the number of well-known ship girls in existence is small, or even unique, then the wandering ship girls must be unclean, they have marks and pasts. I understand the author's design for the protagonist's personality and main storyline. I even thought the foreshadowing and plot twists were well done at certain points. However, while it's true that the ship girls are all kind, this doesn't necessarily mean the protagonist has more to think about. After all, liking someone and being intelligent aren't directly related. I have no ill will toward any novel that exceeds the standard; I simply hope it can become even better. Businesses tend to be rational, not psychological, but action-oriented. So this statement is certainly acceptable, because businesses don't care if the speaker is eloquent; they focus on extracting the information contained within. But if the protagonist is such a person, then it's inappropriate. He's missing the point, so how can we talk about saving the ship? First of all, I don't mean to argue. After all, I've read this far, and it would be too fake to say I don't like it. I don't want to let anything affect my reading experience because I'm very sensitive. I just have to get this off my chest. It's a real shame that there are so many weak protagonists in Kantai Collection novels. I don't want to dwell on the minor flaws, but there's nothing I can do about it. To be honest, the author has been gone for so long now, I don't know who I'm saying these things to, because it's meaningless. It's not that fanfiction is wrong. For example, the book "Commander's Strategy Guide" was okay in the early stages, but it became monotonous and just a pornographic book later on. It was very pure, but I don't think it can be called fanfiction or a novel. It's no different from adult fanfiction. It's okay to masturbate, but not to read. To be continued

Isn't this a Kantai Collection (Kancolle) setting? Why is it a skin for Kantai Collection (Kancolle)?