Martial Saint!

I don't know what I think about this book. It's extremely complicated to practice martial arts. Can you become an immortal or an ancestor if you practice so many techniques at one level? What's the use of being invincible to the protagonist at the same level? If you meet someone at a high level, you won't be crushed to death. Everyone knows that only when you are at a high level will you have time to practice other things. The protagonist is so stupid and a low level can cultivate them in piles. I can't compare to the geniuses, but they are stuck in the middle. Is this because they have no brains? The protagonist has practiced one or two exercises and no longer knows what realm he is. He should pursue high realm things at a low realm. Is his brain flooded? The protagonist can't make progress, or he cannot understand high realm things at a high realm. He should pursue them at a low realm. What a stupid thing.

This book is too short, with nearly 20,000 words in six chapters, not much about practice. It is all about family trivial matters, which are mentioned as if they are chanting sutras. The opinions of classmates, teachers, and parents form the main body of the article. Have you gone into depth when writing a novel about Xiao Bai's Golden Finger novel? Even if I don't read the rest of the book, I generally know that this book is not that exciting. It's very simple. If you haven't written anything in the first tens of thousands of words, why should you write it in the later stage? It's ridiculous that someone else uses more than ten chapters to describe something that takes two chapters.

It's hard to comment, 500,000 a year, the commercial value of buying the protagonist for four years... If you don't have to do anything, forget it, you have to cooperate with business activities, this little money counts... I came from the starting point...

How to put it this way, if you feel bored, you can use it to kill time, but if you use it for reading, I don't recommend it. It looks like a running account, just like a primary school student writing about where I went to play today and what I encountered. It has no appeal. Turning on the function is also optional and extremely boring.

The writing is getting worse and worse. What kind of realm do you have? I went to understand the Tao Yun of the ancestor who opened the way. I haven't learned to walk yet and I miss him. It's really nonsense. What you mean by writing like this is that your high school students can discuss geometry with kindergarten students. The protagonist is just a nobody. You haven't even reached a certain level in your major in Tiger Form. You should learn some exercises from one place and some artistic conception from the other. You have to clear the way, you have to innovate, and you just have to reach a certain level. You are such an idiot when you are a primary school student and you have to learn high school stuff and still think about the whole system.

Except for very specific genres, novels that do not include female protagonists are inherently unreasonable from a world perspective. In most cases, the author is afraid of not being able to write well, but if he is really not good at it, he can just go through it in one go and not write down the emotional line in detail. I remember there was an author whose heroine was invisible at the beginning. Even with this person, this way of writing would work. In particular, this situation can only reduce the number of women appearing, but some authors particularly like to write various descriptions and add all kinds of descriptions that involve other people's emotional lines. The protagonist is not the main character, and the supporting characters are written in various ways. It is not necessarily poisonous. Some book friends are indeed afraid that the author will not be good at writing and have been poisoned by some novel heroines, but from a novel perspective, you still have to write. You cannot stop writing because you are not good at it. If you stay in the comfort zone, you will never write well, not to mention that no one has written without detailed emotional lines. And have you ever thought about one thing, since you don't write about female protagonists, why do you write about family relationships? In particular, I especially like to write about my parents urging me to get married! Various detailed descriptions of female supporting characters!

After reading Chapter 11, I really can't stand it anymore. It's too toxic. I feel like the male protagonist is a pure waste. He's just as slow as he is. I wrote this kind of cool article just for the sake of having fun. The author may be stupid, and he suppresses the male protagonist desperately. His writing style is quite good, and he has written the most useless male protagonist on the site.

No protagonist: He is just a passer-by who can talk to each other. The protagonist himself has no thoughts at all. Even when he sees the content of Goldfinger, he describes it like a human machine! No plot: There is no plot at all, it's all his, her, and other's opinions, it's a mess. Insipid: The first few dozen chapters are full of water. This panel has to be opened even if it's 100% practiced. Some people praise it for adding a few tenths of energy and blood. This book: The settings of Qi and blood are scattered (if you don't count, the level promotion will be inexplicable later), the martial arts system: the first impression is all ancient prose, which is difficult to practice, but this is the first time that a novel is mixed with the ancient prose system, and even the fighting scenes are ancient dramas (usually a few ancient verses are occasionally added, you old antique?) Content: The data is not like data, the martial arts is not like martial arts, the fighting scenes are retro, and the martial arts are also retro, and the system is inexplicable. Stake work can open acupuncture points without using energy, and practice to death!

It's too bland, I don't even have the slightest desire to read it. It's so boring and uninteresting even from beginning to end. I might as well watch Tomato, at least it's interesting in the early stages!

The words on the cover are all wrong, it's too funny