
Mortal: the Whole Gate of God's Hand Valley Has Been Destroyed at the Beginning
by Snow Kite
About This Novel
Travel through the legend of mortals cultivating immortals and start the journey of cultivating immortals. Note: The Legend of Reborn Mortals Cultivation to Immortality is not the Legend of Taoist Cultivation of Immortality, and does not accept the setting of the Immortal World chapter.
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Official(16)Scraped 10d ago
After reading Chapter 6, please consider carefully if you continue reading.
I don't understand what is going on in Chapter 6. A little trash in the Qi training period, when he saw the alchemy monks fighting, not only did he not hide, but he dared to chase him. It would be fine if the protagonist was a casual cultivator who had no chance of having a spiritual root difference. If he had a small bottle of alien spiritual roots, he would still be a monk from the Yellow Maple Valley, and he would still chase after him.
It's okay, it's a lot of nonsense
There's something wrong with the protagonist's brain, I really can't stand it
There are too many private conversations and there needs to be more plot, otherwise it will be too boring.
The harem is well received. This is how time travel should be. You don't need to consider the original work. Why travel when you consider the original work?
The harem is well received. This is how time travel should be. You don't need to consider the original work. Why travel when you consider the original work?
Self-healing water numbers
The whole novel is filled with numbers and women who are having sex with each other.
golden elixir
When I scanned my consciousness, I discovered something
mortal new flow
This writing is really nice, not bad, keep up the good work😀
I almost vomited what I wrote. People of decades past and present pretended to be children and pretended to be addicted.
I want to know if you are a cultivator or something. I read a chapter and it was all about girls.
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Community(0)
Official(16)Scraped 10d ago
After reading Chapter 6, please consider carefully if you continue reading.
I don't understand what is going on in Chapter 6. A little trash in the Qi training period, when he saw the alchemy monks fighting, not only did he not hide, but he dared to chase him. It would be fine if the protagonist was a casual cultivator who had no chance of having a spiritual root difference. If he had a small bottle of alien spiritual roots, he would still be a monk from the Yellow Maple Valley, and he would still chase after him.
It's okay, it's a lot of nonsense
There's something wrong with the protagonist's brain, I really can't stand it
There are too many private conversations and there needs to be more plot, otherwise it will be too boring.
The harem is well received. This is how time travel should be. You don't need to consider the original work. Why travel when you consider the original work?
The harem is well received. This is how time travel should be. You don't need to consider the original work. Why travel when you consider the original work?
Self-healing water numbers
The whole novel is filled with numbers and women who are having sex with each other.
golden elixir
When I scanned my consciousness, I discovered something
mortal new flow
This writing is really nice, not bad, keep up the good work😀
I almost vomited what I wrote. People of decades past and present pretended to be children and pretended to be addicted.
I want to know if you are a cultivator or something. I read a chapter and it was all about girls.










