Mortal's Journey to Immortality

Mortal's Journey to Immortality

by Talker

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591Kwords235chapters
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Ch. 235发育万年
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7.3QD Score

About This Novel

(Management + Sinister + Struggle for Hegemony + Mortal Fandom) Yang Xuan accidentally traveled to a world where mortals were cultivating immortals, and he had a jade plate in his hand. Let's see how he starts from the Hidden Moon Sect and dominates all realms! (Wine and meat have gone through the intestines, but the avenue remains in the heart. In addition, the plot will not completely match the original work, and some will be interspersed with animation content. In terms of prices, try to be as reasonable as possible.)

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Misty Rain Sends Jiangnan25mo ago

To be honest, the writing is too low.

I have read more than fifty chapters so far. It gives me the impression that he is a man who is willing to take advantage of others and unleash the evil in his heart in the world of immortality. Unrestrained. Let me give you a heads up. There is a plot in the book where you harvest first and then kill. To be honest, this is the first time I have encountered this situation after reading books for so many years. To be honest, the male protagonist in the book is really a bit down. At least in reality, I cannot do this kind of thing under nine years of compulsory education. Either kill or let go. Second, in the article, Goldfinger tells the truth that the setting is not perfect at all. What we can see so far is only the enhanced functions, but it also has evolutionary characteristics. The author also thinks about what is what. First of all, the protagonist's original constitution is the three-yang body and the three spiritual roots. Goldfinger does not think about improving his qualifications first, but always engages in external things. If I first improve my qualifications immediately, I should get some six-yang, nine-yang, or some yin-yang constitution. After all, the body of the three yangs still has flaws, and yang energy is always prone to excess. If the lonely yin does not grow, the lonely yang will not grow. The balance of yin and yang is the way to go. As your physique improves, your practice speed will be faster, and the more attention you will receive. Secondly, Golden Finger did not propose an effect that could only be improved once. We were confused and didn't know if it could be improved again. In the end, it also seems to overwhelm the protagonist, or maybe the author didn't even think of it. The mortal system is too simple. The physical body in the elixir formation stage weighs only a few hundred kilograms. Tens of thousands of kilograms can kill the Void Refining Stage. Cultivation of immortality is based on cultivating the three treasures of essence, energy and spirit. Can't you get some ancient method of cultivating the three cultivation methods of Dharma Body and Shen? Even a broken copy can be evolved using golden fingers. If it doesn't work, first get a method to cultivate both body and law, then evolve it, and then evolve it again in the Dayan Jue. The Great Sun Haotian Sutra obtained in the article has twice the mana of the same level. It's not even as good as the original Qingyuan Sword Jue, which is embarrassing to say. Among them, once the third-level Heavy Yuan Art is mastered, it will be at least several times higher than that of the same level. This is the original text. Looking at it this way, your evolved technique is really stupid. Always upgrade and evolve some foreign objects. It's like picking up sesame seeds and losing watermelon. If you travel through time and are caught by a black evil spirit, your life will not be in danger. On the contrary, his original physique is a three-yang body, and Golden Finger should improve his physique and evolve as soon as possible. The second time is to evolve the skills during the Qi training period, and the third time is to experiment whether the second evolution is possible. If that doesn't work, consider external objects. This is only reasonable. You are not young when you travel to the past. If your qualifications can be improved, improve them. After establishing the foundation, you can change the exercises. You can consider the exercises for dual cultivation of body and law, even if it is a broken copy, it can evolve anyway, 🖊️it is in your hands. You can play whatever you want. Third, regarding Xin Ruyin, it is really both worthy and established. You want someone, but you don't want them. They are talented, and the formations made during the Qi training period can compete with the pill formation period. Not to mention the human world, even in the spiritual world there are very few people with such talent. Can't you just cheat if you have the golden finger in your hand? The body of the dragon roar evolves, the yang pole generates yin, the dragon and the phoenix sing in harmony. The body of dragons and phoenixes. The most top-notch cultivation physique. Isn't this coming? Anyway, your golden finger can cheat, which is not too outrageous. She can practice cultivation. In this way, the benefits brought to you are the highest and most long-term among the mortal women. Nangong Wan was a soft rice in the early stage. Chen Qiaoqian's love brain, mortal regret, Zi Ling, Yuan Yao, Ling Yuling, Yinyue, Bingfeng, among mortals, if these women have the highest income from having a harem, Chen Qiaoqian does not count, it is just a pure regret. I forgot about the plot of the spiritual world. Just accept other women as long as they are reasonable. But. . . But. . . The main character in this article is driven by desire and impatient. As soon as he entered the sect, he became very lustful. It's also quite speechless. Fourth, I don't want to read the later ones, and I can't read them either. Spirit Beast Bag Man, you are also the leader of mortal fandom. It's hard to comment on this. I can only say that I can't appreciate it. In the original work and the fanfic, only corpse training can be included. But there are also specialized body bags for practice. For this kind of pretense, in the original book, only Dajin has a cave magic weapon refined by a weapon refiner, which cannot be moved. Mobile space treasures are not reflected in the original work. Even fanfics are just for fun. You are a talent. Okay, I have written so much and I don't know if I can post it. There is a high probability that the comment will be deleted.

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Jitian 926mo ago

There is no benefit to joining the Hidden Moon Sect, and you can just become a disciple casually without seeing whether it is suitable. In this case, it is better to become a disciple of Li Huayuan directly.

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In My Heart, I Am Always 🈶you 💕26mo ago

It's okay! Neither good nor bad. Wowotou, you can eat it. There is a problem. Most of the novels written by mortals dare not open the big screen. Why, can you write about jumping? The one that hangs open is not as good as the original.

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Fantasyxh25mo ago

I just like the author's style, I don't understand why it's not popular

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Cool_ee26mo ago

The IQ is online, there is no brainlessness, the plot is okay, the harem is not outrageous, and it satisfies most people's dream of cultivating immortals and picking up girls😘

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Drunk Dream Music24mo ago

Why do you need to tell the Moon-Sealing Sect about the teleportation array? Can't watch anymore

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Crazy Handsome Old Devil14mo ago

The writing is not bad, it is indeed more in line with the world view of mortals, and it is not a bad thing for the protagonist to be lecherous. After all, men are not lecherous. It is right to throw away or kill those women who are not. This world is originally a law of the jungle, and the protagonist is not that bad. I think this book is better than most mortal fandoms. Those fandoms are like idiots and yell when they see injustice. Life or death depends on God's will. That is really disgusting.

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Fantasyxh25mo ago

The writing is smooth, the plot has a sense of expectation without following the original route, and the second setting is reasonable and close to reality. I hope it can be finished, don't be a eunuch.

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Dancing Rain and Orange Wind_ae24mo ago

Mortal's journey to immortality

Very few people write about hegemony in mortal fan fiction. Come on, author, I hope you will be optimistic.

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Ouyang Xiaofeng23mo ago

The first part was a little bit worse, but the later parts got better and better, and I felt more and more great. Highly recommended by five-star reviews.

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