Mortals Become Invincible from the Time They Become Disciples of Lei Wanhe
About This Novel
When Shen Qing traveled through the mortal world, he thought it was the beginning of a collapse of heaven. Unexpectedly, two high-level exercises and a mysterious treasure came with him, and from then on he began to build an invincible road. There are some regrets that need to be made up for, such as Chen Qiaoqian who died alone, Senior Brother Liu who eliminated demons and defended the Tao, Li Huayuan who fought to the death, Xin Ruyin who was tortured by the Dragon Roar Body, Zi Ling who fell into the blood feud of her parents, Mei Ning who formed a pill and had no hope of being reborn, and Yuan Yao who loved love and righteousness and fell under the catastrophe. Shen Qing said: I will change all this!
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Official(25)Scraped 8d ago
The original Mortal novel is so well written that I don't feel any regrets about it. I didn't give it a score of 9 or above if I wrote a Mortal fanfic. Don't write about women. I'll just increase the score. The more you write without any level, the more mistakes you will make. It is better to devote yourself to cultivating immortality.
Thunder and Fire Twin Spirits, have you never seen a mortal cultivating immortality?
I have read so many mortal fan fictions and this is the first time I saw the twin spiritual roots of thunder and fire.
The biggest feature of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is reality. It is best for fans to write less about women related to the protagonist. There is no shortage of women. Follow your own path and don't be a licking dog.
You said you wanted Han Li to help you practice elixirs, why? Treat everyone as a fool?
After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it.
Mortals have a lot of regrets, but don't other people have regrets? Can you save them one by one and cultivate yourself to immortality? Mo Juren has no regrets, Jin Guang has no regrets, Mo Caihuan has no regrets, Six Paths, Two Saints, can you save me?
I think the protagonist should pursue the path of cultivating immortality. It feels too awkward.
It's rare that Nangong Wan is not accepted.
It's not unreasonable for the rating to be so low. What did you write in the Golden Three Chapters? You are writing a novel. Everything is covered in one stroke. I don't understand. What should we think? Do you understand what it means? We seem to be very uncomfortable. There are a lot of street elements.
personal evaluation
First of all, it looks very embarrassing, and the plot is not very smooth. I won't talk about it in the early stages. Before entering the Bloody Forbidden Land, I agreed to cooperate with Han Li. But after entering, in addition to the protagonist being a thug at the beginning, Zhongli is still the person from Spirit Beast Mountain. Well, after solving the whole process. *** Is with the woman named Chen, who also writes very well, and then, a junior in the Qi refining period, the things in the box, I say ugly, except for the token that can be inherited by the ancient monks, including the talisman, I say ugly, even if it is gold Danyuan Yingjing can also be used. Hoho, when it comes to the protagonist, it is useless not to care. Let's not talk about other things. It is very embarrassing, including the fact that the woman named Chen was accepted as the protagonist earlier. The two of them walked on the front foot and Han Li was behind them, including the fact that Han Li found out that After studying it for a while, he knew what it was, and finally said that he could figure out the protagonist. However, when the Bloody Ban began, Han Li forgot about this thing, and after entering anyway, he started to cooperate with others, which is ugly to say. It's not a collaboration. I can't stand the rest of it either. It's too damn vicious. The author of the plot is also very awesome. I just said that I also read the comments and said they compared the animation or something. Anyway, the author just wrote according to his own ideas. Anyway, the writing was very embarrassing.
Rating
Community(0)
Official(25)Scraped 8d ago
The original Mortal novel is so well written that I don't feel any regrets about it. I didn't give it a score of 9 or above if I wrote a Mortal fanfic. Don't write about women. I'll just increase the score. The more you write without any level, the more mistakes you will make. It is better to devote yourself to cultivating immortality.
Thunder and Fire Twin Spirits, have you never seen a mortal cultivating immortality?
I have read so many mortal fan fictions and this is the first time I saw the twin spiritual roots of thunder and fire.
The biggest feature of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality is reality. It is best for fans to write less about women related to the protagonist. There is no shortage of women. Follow your own path and don't be a licking dog.
You said you wanted Han Li to help you practice elixirs, why? Treat everyone as a fool?
After reading the introduction, I didn't want to read it.
Mortals have a lot of regrets, but don't other people have regrets? Can you save them one by one and cultivate yourself to immortality? Mo Juren has no regrets, Jin Guang has no regrets, Mo Caihuan has no regrets, Six Paths, Two Saints, can you save me?
I think the protagonist should pursue the path of cultivating immortality. It feels too awkward.
It's rare that Nangong Wan is not accepted.
It's not unreasonable for the rating to be so low. What did you write in the Golden Three Chapters? You are writing a novel. Everything is covered in one stroke. I don't understand. What should we think? Do you understand what it means? We seem to be very uncomfortable. There are a lot of street elements.
personal evaluation
First of all, it looks very embarrassing, and the plot is not very smooth. I won't talk about it in the early stages. Before entering the Bloody Forbidden Land, I agreed to cooperate with Han Li. But after entering, in addition to the protagonist being a thug at the beginning, Zhongli is still the person from Spirit Beast Mountain. Well, after solving the whole process. *** Is with the woman named Chen, who also writes very well, and then, a junior in the Qi refining period, the things in the box, I say ugly, except for the token that can be inherited by the ancient monks, including the talisman, I say ugly, even if it is gold Danyuan Yingjing can also be used. Hoho, when it comes to the protagonist, it is useless not to care. Let's not talk about other things. It is very embarrassing, including the fact that the woman named Chen was accepted as the protagonist earlier. The two of them walked on the front foot and Han Li was behind them, including the fact that Han Li found out that After studying it for a while, he knew what it was, and finally said that he could figure out the protagonist. However, when the Bloody Ban began, Han Li forgot about this thing, and after entering anyway, he started to cooperate with others, which is ugly to say. It's not a collaboration. I can't stand the rest of it either. It's too damn vicious. The author of the plot is also very awesome. I just said that I also read the comments and said they compared the animation or something. Anyway, the author just wrote according to his own ideas. Anyway, the writing was very embarrassing.
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