The Warden Who Guards the Witches

Although it is not 100% satisfactory, for me, who is still a bookworm, it is still quite attractive and interesting, but there is still room for improvement. I hope the author will work harder, be more productive, and improve the quality. Then after looking at the characters so far, I would like to make some simple comments. The first is the characters. I feel that so far, whether it is the protagonist or the supporting character, although the character's personality characteristics are very obvious and can be said to be very full, they are a bit lacking in appearance characteristics. I feel that the author focuses on the inside and not the outside. However, the appearance description I am talking about does not necessarily mean that he looks like Xiao Huang. The kind of things in the article are pretty, plump, etc. It doesn't necessarily have to be how to describe handsomeness or beauty, but I hope to add some physical features, just like in the unit drama of Corpse Demon and Camilla, the friend of Slaine's son has a scar on his face, which is similar to such physical features. Take the protagonist, for example, the cat-eye ring that appears once or twice. If this is the physical feature of the protagonist, and then one or two sentences are emphatically described in the paragraph each time, the reader will remember this physical feature. Then when the author wants to narrate from another character in the future, but if he wants to meet the protagonist, he does not need to directly state at the beginning that he is the protagonist. If he uses the same sentence describing the ring before, the reader will be able to understand directly from this physical feature that this person is the protagonist. A sentence that describes appearance as a characteristic while describing appearance does not become nonsense. Another point is that there are very few environmental descriptions of each scene in the book, almost none. But judging from the current fluency, it seems that there is really no need to put too much effort into this. However, sometimes I still hope that the author can be more detailed about the description of the environment, so that we readers can have more sense of the picture. Take the Rose Iron Prison as an example. As someone who has never seen a prison in real life, and has never been in a prison, it is hard to imagine. The impression I have of the core area in my mind right now is only one corridor, with cells with iron bars on the left and right. Then the witches on both sides of the cell scrambled to lie on the bars. Zu An greeted the warden who was patrolling the corridor... In fact, the Rose Iron Prison that I originally imagined was a round, tall steel building with an appearance similar to the Colosseum, with 9 floors underground and 9 floors above ground. The top floor is the area for the warden and prison guards. The 8th floor is a utility room that also contains some equipment used to suppress prisoners. The 7th floor is The infirmary, library and some activity rooms, and then from the 6th floor to the 1st floor are the prisoners in the general area, and the 1st to 8th floors underground are the prisoners in the core area. The bottom floor is Melifilia, but if you want to go to the bottom, you can only go down from the warden's office on the top floor... And isn't it a bit too simple to call the mercury ball a small ball... I always thought her name would be Tina, because of T-1000, and I guess she will be able to turn into a human form in the future, and it should be a female shape, so it sounds nice to call her Tina.

The author must have also read Mystery. In fact, in this post-Mystery era, there are bound to be many similar works popping up. Personally, I feel that this book is already great. Different stories under the same general framework, and the various subplots are also very well arranged. I look forward to describing a larger stage later. I say I am a little touched because when I see the protagonist of this book, I will inexplicably think of "Captain Dunn Smith" 5555. I only became aware of this type of novel through Squid Girl. I am very satisfied to read the author's work after Mystery is half-finished. Keep up the good work!

The author has only read 20 chapters of this book. It was pretty good after the previous time travel, but it was broken when a god appeared. It was a bit poisonous. A god would be imprisoned? The dimensions of strength are different, right? Even a little thought from a god can destroy the entire human race. And if this god transports the protagonist through time, doesn't the god of the earth care? Doesn't it mean that the person who can not say hello to the earth god must have the will of the great road? Isn't this saying that it is best for the god to open his eyes and close his eyes to time travel? Are you saying that an ordinary person can really time travel? The one with no background at the back can live longer. The author should not forget that a fairy can start a planet with just one thought, so how can such a god snatch people from the earth, heaven and hell, such as between countries, the people above don't care about your travels or anything, but killing people is a big deal, not to mention that the earth is equivalent to a big country, and the ones over there are equivalent to inferior villages, and they still want people? For what reason, Liang Jingru's courage?

After the protagonist gained the ability to transform, he did not lose his sense of pain. If the little killer still has to bear the loss of his sense of pain, then this setting is too buggy.

A good book is a good book, the plot is very good, and it is very innovative, but you describe so many beautiful supporting female characters, but not one of them has a relationship, even if you describe it vaguely, this is a bit too (｀Δ´)!

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Is there a book with a female protagonist? Does anyone know?

I was thinking that the writing is not bad, but why is the popularity so low? I remember that I used to like to read it, but now I want to find some books that I have read before and thought they were good, but I can't find them at all. It took me a long time to find this book.

As an old bookworm, when I read half of it, I felt like it had become a book apologizing for the grievances of the prisoners. A person who manages a prison is too busy redressing the grievances of others. Back out of the pit

I'm more curious about how a male cell leader manages his second brother when he watches a group of beauties.