Under the Punch

1. The content and text are smooth. 2. The protagonist kills decisively. 3. Although the protagonist has been reborn, he has been a human being in two lives. The knowledge from his previous life has no effect at present. He was an ordinary mortal in his previous life and pursues martial arts after his rebirth. The current rebirth setting is optional. 4. The poor are rich in literature and rich in martial arts, and the medicinal materials needed for martial arts training are very valuable. The protagonist's family generally has little money, and the protagonist does not think about how to make money. He catches wild animals without selling them or exchanging them for something. Instead, he donates all of them to feed the educated youths. It is not obvious that the relationship is good. Those who always take advantage of the protagonist do not help each other, so the protagonist helps unilaterally, even if it is mailed back to his hometown to his family. 5. The protagonist got two treasure maps from Xie Laosan and handed over one of them, hoping that the official experts would attract attention, but it did not work. Outsiders didn't know how much the protagonist knew. They would guess that the protagonist had written down the map or would still come to the protagonist. The protagonist was not careful enough and his strength was not high. 6. The official masters all work alone. Regardless of Gong Er or Li Da, although they have their own strength, they do not have an overwhelming advantage against the villains. Wouldn't it be better to send one or two more masters to form a team? Even if the masters are insufficient, sending some elite veterans can still play a big role.

The protagonist's halo is a bit strong, and I don't know what kind of setting Xue Hen is in the author's book. But judging from the first twenty or thirty chapters, he should be a master in the martial arts when he appears. But I don't understand that such a person who can react to a submachine gun in a narrow tomb passage and calmly dodge bullets can be successfully attacked by a newcomer like the protagonist with fists and kicks? After seeing this, I really want to complain, but I have to wait and see the follow-up.

Come on, author, I am optimistic about you. I hope that the novels in the future will not be as messy as the current novels, like a big mess. I will vote for you every month. Come on, there will be more. Some of them are not enough to read.

It might be better to put the background in the Republic of China. When it comes to the country, it feels a bit awkward.

It's okay, but the writing about the Tai Chi Sect's performance of the competition is too naive, unlike the previous one written by one person. The challenge is on the surface. If you dare to recognize the sect, you can be safe. If you lose, you will kill him later. It's okay to kill, everything will be over. Even if someone comes to seek revenge later, there are still some bullshit rules in the world, and the sect can blame a few people for the blame. The sect It can still be saved. If there is no killing, what is the use of letting people go back? It was Tai Chi Sect's fault in the first place. Now that they have not won in the ring, they have not succeeded in killing, and they have not taken any face, this Tai Chi Sect must all die. At most, other Wu Sect colleagues will step forward to protect a few small shrimps outside the core to keep the rear. Others still have to die. Why try the world in boxing in the future? Now that I have lost and admitted, what can I rely on to retaliate against a woman who wants to test the world with boxing? If she dares to kill her now, there will be no future. If the author didn't directly write that the protagonist comes to the door and directly destroys the family, then this book will be like this. Don't give me any bullshit about being generous and leaving it for future boxing. What qualifications does a woman who paved the way for her sect have died without coming forward to try boxing? And being generous doesn't mean being brainless and arrogant.

It was changed to 1978. The protagonist was reborn for three years and stayed until 1979 to join the queue and go to the mountains and countryside. If you are not reborn, forget it. Whoever is reborn would choose this period to go to the mountains and countryside. . Choosing 1979 to start the story is very speechless. You can write about the Republic of China in the past, and the 1990s in the future. In 1979, the male protagonist is 18 years old. There is really nothing to write about in the next ten years. By the time the economy takes off in the 1990s, the male protagonist will be over 30. This era of pure Chinese martial arts is not as exciting as the Republic of China, and Chinese martial arts + business is not as exciting as the 1990s. In this era, it is difficult to travel far away, and information is closed. All plots can only be chosen in China, but in the ten years after 1979, I really did not expect that there would be any plots to watch.

Like the title, I think I can write about Zhutianliu or the background of the film and television world. After all, real-life martial arts is a bit too dramatic. Why not write about mixed martial arts?

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