If You Are in Emei, Get the Golden Entry at the Beginning

It's about 20 chapters into the book, and it's just a plot, you go up the mountain to practice, and then practice. It made me sleepy in the middle of the night. I'm too young to go down the mountain. You can write some daily interactions with the senior sisters. I just practice there all day long and put together some theories. It's the same as that Douluo's blue silver grass paper. Why, I'm learning to practice while watching it!

There are random levels, internal strength is divided into levels, and power is also divided into levels. The first level of internal strength and mental skills can be divided into small success and great success. I use words randomly, but I still chuckle in my heart. I don't know how the author came up with it. The protagonist is eleven or twelve years old, and he has just been on the mountain for more than a month, so he is asked to go down the mountain to experience. Is this because he wants the protagonist to die outside? And Ding Minjun, doesn't she make the protagonist and author uncomfortable?

I don't quite understand those plots that like to hide the progress of one's martial arts. You said that if you join a sect with intrigues or are in a worrying situation, then forget it. Is the Emei master and sister who the protagonist joins bad for the protagonist? There has to be a cliche plot that is concealed because of concerns about progress being too fast. Shouldn't the genius within the sect be protected and given more resources when discovered? What is the point of concealing it?

I'm speechless. I don't know what the author is thinking. He could wait for Master Miejie to bring back the Nine Yin Manual and merge them together into a stronger technique. However, he doesn't wait for direct fusion or give a reason for direct fusion. Then after a few pages, Master Miejie brings back the Nine Yin Manual. The author is treating the readers as fools.

It's pretty good-looking, but it's a pity that it's mixed martial arts. I have never seen a few authors who don't fail to write comprehensively. I hope the author will work hard

Authors who write martial arts novels have one thing in common, that is, they always feel that one world is not enough for them to write. They want to make more comprehensive martial arts. In fact, the routines they write are too old and have too many flaws. The writing is not good enough. The small world is not over yet, and most readers have given up. So there is no need to write so many. If the book is good, you can write a system to achieve hidden goals and ascend to other worlds.

1. The content and text are smooth. 2. A little water. 3. The early stage was dull and without climax. 4. No poisonous spots were found in the early stage. 5. The starting point is good, the understanding is good, there is a lottery, except that the helium gold is not opened, the growth is too fast.

The front is okay, but the back is full of pretentiousness and slaps in the face, and the pretense is very stiff. I'm really disappointed. There is still a lot of room for decline in this score.

A high-end atmosphere, A Xiaojiabiyu. Senior Sister, according to the lines in the TV series I watched, in my impression she became bad only after being hurt by others. There must have been someone she loved deeply who betrayed her. The second senior sister can do whatever she wants and listen to the senior sister, but she also wants to be a good person, gentle and kind. That's why I had some conflicts with Senior Sister. If I were to travel through time, I would definitely choose the senior sister to be the lead female lead. I think it is incredible to have a single female lead.

If there was no protagonist, would Mei Jiangxue be poisoned by ordinary people? Is it still necessary to learn this martial art?