Reborn Xiaoao: I Want to Be a Leader

After reading the writing in the first three chapters, I thought 8.1 Was greatly underestimated. After reading it, I realized that the writing of this book was too awkward. Jin Yong's book itself is a good read. If you write a Jin Yong fan and want to write in your own style, there is no problem, but the overall focus of the book has changed. Wuxia is not Jin Yong at all, but more like the Book of the Dead, but the pattern is too low, a bit neither up nor down. This style of writing is very similar to that of martial arts in the past. It seems a bit depressing. It is not the pure and refreshing style of today. However, it does not dare to offend readers, and it does not dare to completely write the tragic literary style of the past. However, it still has that flavor, which makes it feel depressing and not exciting enough. It's just a Jianghu gangster, and it has to be written like a court. It's all about words, and it looks like the characters have brains. In the end, the supporting characters with brains ruined the book. Each character has his own position. The supporting role should be a supporting role. There is no need to give him too much brains. Little people have their own way of survival, but they also have their own short-sightedness and stupidity. With the level of modern education being so high, is there a shortage of stupid people? Don't try to create too many characters. A good supporting character should serve the protagonist. If you don't prioritize one, you will inevitably lose sight of the other. The author may want to write a martial arts of his own, but what I read is really not enough. I suggest you learn more about how Jin Yong's "Shuangwen" is written. It is relaxed and relaxed, with clear priorities, and the overall atmosphere is at least relaxed. Generally speaking, this is not like a martial arts novel, but a historical court novel, which is more suitable.

There are 30,000 unemployed believers and more than 1,000 people were killed in a single conflict with Wuyue. I am speechless. People with this ability are still wandering around in the world.

The writing is very good, and the writing style is very good. I hope the protagonist's martial arts progress will be accelerated. In the later stage, I hope that the martial arts practiced by the protagonist will not be too complicated. A practice method that suits you is enough. I don't want it to be the method in the original work.

Dantian? Smiling and proud? Open up Dantian from the beginning? What are the eight extraordinary meridians? People are divided into first-class, super-first-class and innate. The upper limit of Swordsman is innate. The kind of Dongfang Bubai who can open up their Dantian will start to practice immortality. After that, they will either expand their Dantian to store their internal energy, or turn it into liquid to form a martial arts elixir. In Swordsman, people judge their aptitude based on their bones and whether their veins are unobstructed. No matter how good they are in martial arts, their veins will be unblocked. In Kung Fu, they are like the rare geniuses like Xingye.

The first part is quite nice, but the further you go, the stupider it gets. Since there is a life and death talisman, why not give it to Ren Yingying? Wouldn't it be easier to control and quickly control the Sun and Moon God Sect? Even if they want to kill you, they still show mercy. Are you an animal controlled by the lower body?

As a martial arts novel, the lowest level has to be divided into the early, middle and late stages, and the breakthrough requires going crazy. How about you write a novel about cultivating immortals? In novels about cultivating immortals, you have to be at a high level to be possessed, right? Have you ever seen a breakthrough in the early stage of Qi training and then go crazy in the later stage? I want to give up my golden finger in order to learn the piano. This protagonist's IQ is just a little better than 🐷

Author, are you writing about Jianghu or brothel? Do you want to see how many women there are? Even the dragon couldn't help but summon it like this!

I hope to conquer Miss Ren, my childhood dream lover

Lao Na prefers scheming and selfish protagonists

The writing is very good, especially the junior sister's writing. It should be one of the rare masterpieces among the fan fictions I have read.