Apprenticeship to Qingcheng Mountain, Senior Fellow Apprentice Yu Canghai

Apprenticeship to Qingcheng Mountain, Senior Fellow Apprentice Yu Canghai

by Make A Fist

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1.4Mwords301chapters
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About This Novel

Traveling through the world of Swordsman, Chu Yuan was not very lucky. He was not able to join the great sect like his predecessors who were time travellers. However, he was brought back to Qingcheng Mountain by Yu Canghai, the head of the Qingcheng Sect, and became Yu Canghai's junior disciple. Qingcheng Sect is not famous for any powerful martial arts. Fortunately, Chu Yuan has special talents and can continuously optimize and even create his own martial arts. Ordinary martial arts in his hands can also be compared to magical skills. When senior brother Yu Canghai expressed his desire to seize the "Evil Sword Manual". Chu Yuan used the long sword in his hand to perform Qingcheng School's entry sword skills, and slashed out a sword energy. The sword energy separated the clouds and mist on the cliff top next to it, and the sea of ​​clouds could not be bridged for a long time. Yu Canghai: Abba Abba... Chu Yuan: Senior brother, our Qingcheng sect is actually not weak in martial arts!

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Human World 98419mo ago

I thought he was a Taoist priest, but turned out to be a fucking loser who went to marry Ren Yingying. It feels like a sacred book turned into toilet paper for wiping your ass. It's disgusting.

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}wireless Dancing{19mo ago

A grain-level novel

This novel is well written and can be regarded as a good book. There are a few little poison spots in it. First, the protagonist is able to create his own skills without enough accumulation. Although there are plug-ins to help, it still feels like a drama. I think there is a problem with the plot design here. The second is the plot of "Jinpen Washing Hands". The protagonist obviously can participate or not, but the underlying logical driving force of the protagonist's behavior is actually insufficient when he forcibly intervenes in the feud between the Five Mountains. It is not like a life-and-death crisis or a personal grudge that must be acted upon. Therefore, this plot is full of craftsmanship and not natural enough. It feels like a plot of water and a bit nosy. Third, at the end of the first volume, the protagonist tells the people around him about his ability to travel to other worlds. This is a bit toxic. Either he will find an excuse to go out and travel and then travel across the world; or he will accompany his relatives and friends to die and then travel across the world. Anyway, it is soul travel, and his lifespan is meaningless to the protagonist. Telling others about his ability to travel through the world, even relatives, will make readers feel uncomfortable. This is not good!

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Book Friends 20230513946_dd22mo ago

It's rubbish. First of all, it just doesn't know how to be a human being. It looks obedient and thinks it knows how to be a human being and do things. In fact, it's just a pleasure. It takes over the body of the original owner. It doesn't care about its own family and even refuses to see each other. It's a bit disgusting.

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🌸galaxy21mo ago

Do you want to be brothers with Ren Woxing? Although it is said that there are good people in the demon sect, I am definitely not the one who lets me do it. I'm afraid it's not because of my brain convulsions, hahahahahahaha

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Book Friends 20231003944_eb20mo ago

The female director Yingying is that green tea bitch, and she is also friends with that shemale from Dongfang Bubai. It's really awesome. Everyone else has to be the female version, otherwise they are the big boss. Is the author selecting readers (perverts)? I can only read the first twenty or thirty chapters, but the more I write about them, the less interesting they become.

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Sharp Writing22mo ago

The Qingcheng Sect doesn't have any unique skills, right? Isn't there a heart-stimulating palm? This is included in the Nine Yin Manual.

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Book Friends 20240730985_ba19mo ago

Nonsense, you don't even know the Qingcheng School's unique skill of changing faces

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Book Friends 2018043009213876421mo ago

Chapter 99: Being poisoned, blindly guessing that he will enter the palace within two hundred chapters Farewell! 🤞🤞🤞

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How is Steel Refining_cd21mo ago

The Qingcheng sect doesn't have any powerful martial arts? ? Have you never heard of the Crane and Nine Heavens Divine Art?

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Open Book with 10,000 Followers18mo ago

I didn't go down the mountain in the early stage, but it looks okay

Then when I went down the mountain, the more I wrote, the more I read, the more disgusted the protagonist became. First of all, the protagonist is not good at being a human being: the causal relationship between the original family is unclear (Moji). He should be set up as an orphan instead of a person with parents (he has been up and down the mountain for more than 10 years, and his original identity has not been seen...) The second is After Coming Down the Mountain: The more I write, the more it collapses. The biggest saint in this book... Is the person who wrote the protagonist. "Don't urge others to be kind if you haven't suffered from them; if someone has suffered from me, they may not be kind to me."

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