Planeswalkers: from Hogwarts to High

I haven't read much, but the beginning has already made me not have hope for this book. On the one hand, I want to develop steadily, and on the other hand, I want to establish a helpful image. Don't you think there is a conflict? I think normal people should just study the plot of Birds and Birds. It is originally a book for primary school students, and the plot is not interesting. It is a normal idea to study magic for a few years to lay the foundation, and then travel through the heavens and advance triumphantly. However, it seems very difficult not to write the original protagonist in this kind of book. I have written everything that can be read.

Even if the protagonist is reborn and grows up again, it will not change his experience of living for decades longer in his previous life. How can any normal person really be interested in these children? Luna in third grade is 14? And Luna isn't pretty either! I've been watching for three minutes and suddenly you're told this kind of plot. Isn't it disgusting? Shouldn't a good planeswalker seek enlightenment from the heavens? Is it true that after the protagonist's bloodline is improved, he can't see the pore mite bacteria on those women's faces? Are you so excited? Laughing like crazy

I'm speechless. I just read the first few chapters. I can't help but think of Chinese food. I even talked about building a high-speed rail. Why? To be honest, as far as food is concerned, I have read a lot of novels of this type. So far, I have read a few of them hundreds of times. I have already become nauseated. No matter how good it is, I can let you read it a hundred times. Are you willing? It's already too old-fashioned, but some people still write, there are high-speed rails, don't you know that people ride buses? One jump is one or two hundred miles per second, and the train is so slow. It's normal. When you go to school, you basically take the train in the morning, and then arrive there in the afternoon or noon. When you get there, you eat, then go to the classroom or idle, just communicate with classmates, and then the teacher says a few words, and then in the evening After eating, go back to the dormitory and stay in bed. This long time is for you to learn more about and talk to those people, and then adapt to the atmosphere. When the time comes, you can eat directly in separate colleges, go back to the dormitory to sleep, and save worry and effort. If they arrive in the morning, there will be no classes during the day, and a group of young wizards are playing there. Isn't that ridiculous?

I don't know if I've read too many HPs, but I always feel like the word count is low. I skipped from Chapter 5 to the start of school, and there was basically no change. In my opinion, it only takes one or two chapters from receiving the notice to the start of school. The origin of the sparks doesn't need to be explained so clearly. This kind of popular science can be written in the chapter description. It's okay to have free chapters now, but you have to pay for it. After buying it, it's basically nonsense.

Chapter 20, even if I try hard to figure out why Pigfoot has to leave the team to fight the trolls alone, it doesn't make sense.

The author doesn't have to write anymore, right? Can you copy a previously written book and change it to create a new book? The protagonist's name is always spelled wrong, and he starts killing for no reason. Were you thinking of doing it online? This style doesn't match at all from before. Don't understand the point at all.

I was originally interested in the HP article written by Helpachy, and the previous writing was good. But when I read Chapter 20, I was completely speechless. It was like a deep well, and suddenly I went to kill a giant in a duel... I couldn't stand it at all.

After the end of the Harry Potter world, I feel like a new person. The rest is really unbearable. Four stars before, one star after.

The author has written before that 3000 energy is the minimum standard for traveling through the world. You can only travel to a world without extraordinary power. Now that I have written a chapter about traveling through the world, the author should not take advantage of the setting!

It's so disgusting. Around the 400th chapter, it's just random writing. The wonderful world is unknown and the garbage world is written desperately. Is it broken? The writing is too watery. It's force-feeding💩. No wonder the score is so low. It's so simple.