Family Cultivator: I Have an Intelligence System

It feels very long-winded and a bit tiring to read, but the writing is okay.

This is an inexplicable place for the protagonist.

After reading Chapter 30, I felt like it was a funny flow plus a schizophrenia flow, talking to myself.

Finally opened a comment? You didn't dare leave a comment before, right? **You read it well. If you write for me, the Tower of Babel will begin to collapse. Then there is the opportunity of Nascent Soul. Look at what other people's intelligence systems write. If you are not suitable for writing novels, why not become an immortal instantly? The protagonist's base-building Heavenly Dao came out. Fortunately, I stopped my losses in time.

Not very good, not fluent, a bit hard to understand

This book about cultivating immortals seems quite easy. Other books about cultivating immortals are very difficult in the early stages.

Intelligence means that you know what is happening. It is not that it has not happened. You know it. It is a prophecy and a prophet. You are wrong about this. You are completely wrong.

I was also convinced. It was the first time I saw this kind of incoherence in a novel. It's a mess with no logical order at all. I can't even stand it.

The worldview is really good, and decency is really real. There are no such things as those who write about decency and read as evil. But the writing style is really good. I am a person who listens to books, so I just want a primary school student to write a composition, which is gentle and gentle. Also, the plot is not connected. On the previous page, I was communicating with a powerful person, and on the next page, I was going to fight against evil cultivators with my peers. In the previous page, I was really discussing the development of the family, and I just said that I went to see the seal. My face was solemn. I should be solemn, right?

After reading Chapter 15, I really can't understand it. I always feel confused and confused.