Is the Identity of the Immortal Chief Exposed? Please Help Me at the Beginning of the Game
by Iron Wrench
About This Novel
Luo Heng traveled to a world full of dynasties. At the beginning, he became a liar whose identity as "immortal chief" was about to be exposed. Fortunately, I got the "Essential Art of Taiping" written by the old immortal Nan Hua. The three volumes of "Heaven, Earth and Man" contain profound Taoist secrets and countless supernatural powers. "Aren't you asking me to open an altar to perform rituals?" "Okay." "At the age of sixty, the world will be prosperous. Thunder Lord helps me!" Looking at the monstrous thunder dragon roaring past and the majestic heavy rain pouring down. The king and his ministers were horrified! ...
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Official(29)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is okay, but there is one flaw, that is, the relationship between the empress and the protagonist is annoying
The author's ideas are okay. but. .
1. Is the author a cute girl? 2. Deliberately describing the psychological drama of the empress and the shyness of the hunting girl, eh. . . How should I say, a bit like that. 3. Being more Machiavellian and less masculine should improve the cohesion. 4. 5. I can't think of anything to write.
Saying it's detached is actually just showing off. Saying it's saving the world is actually good for doing good deeds.
Attracted by the opening chapter, the more I read, the less I can stand it. The second chapter no longer has the fairy-like feel of the previous chapter. Later, I started to describe the lustful and emotional lines, which felt so strange. Not an immortal? How does it feel to become the national master of a country🤐. 🤐🤐
Why didn't you open your heavenly eyes when you saved the censor's wife before?
Don't talk about patronage deals, deal with the emperor
Shennong tested the poison and died from the poison, so retreat quickly!
Gagaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa proceeded
The subject matter is good, but it's too watery and I like to play awkward games.
One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, ninety
Damn cheesy routine
Damn this cliché. The emperor is a woman and she understands everything. As soon as she learns a new healing technique, some people rush to let the protagonist pretend. The writing is still poor. What if the envoys from other countries said behind my back, "What if the empress came to court the emperor for me?" No name? What is "Empress"? Shouldn't the name be mentioned here? To take a step back, when the country is called "Daqian", shouldn't it be "Qiandi"? I say "empress" just to give readers a "very noble and unique" feeling. She is the only female emperor in this book. In fact, when I read this, it really made me so poisoned that I didn't read the rest. I'll insert an eye here, and then there will be an empress. I will stand on my head to wash my hair.
It's so good. I've finished reading it. I've never read such a good novel. I am uneducated and can only be represented by the character "6"
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Official(29)Scraped 7d ago
The writing is okay, but there is one flaw, that is, the relationship between the empress and the protagonist is annoying
The author's ideas are okay. but. .
1. Is the author a cute girl? 2. Deliberately describing the psychological drama of the empress and the shyness of the hunting girl, eh. . . How should I say, a bit like that. 3. Being more Machiavellian and less masculine should improve the cohesion. 4. 5. I can't think of anything to write.
Saying it's detached is actually just showing off. Saying it's saving the world is actually good for doing good deeds.
Attracted by the opening chapter, the more I read, the less I can stand it. The second chapter no longer has the fairy-like feel of the previous chapter. Later, I started to describe the lustful and emotional lines, which felt so strange. Not an immortal? How does it feel to become the national master of a country🤐. 🤐🤐
Why didn't you open your heavenly eyes when you saved the censor's wife before?
Don't talk about patronage deals, deal with the emperor
Shennong tested the poison and died from the poison, so retreat quickly!
Gagaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa proceeded
The subject matter is good, but it's too watery and I like to play awkward games.
One, two, three, four, five, six, seven, eight, ninety
Damn cheesy routine
Damn this cliché. The emperor is a woman and she understands everything. As soon as she learns a new healing technique, some people rush to let the protagonist pretend. The writing is still poor. What if the envoys from other countries said behind my back, "What if the empress came to court the emperor for me?" No name? What is "Empress"? Shouldn't the name be mentioned here? To take a step back, when the country is called "Daqian", shouldn't it be "Qiandi"? I say "empress" just to give readers a "very noble and unique" feeling. She is the only female emperor in this book. In fact, when I read this, it really made me so poisoned that I didn't read the rest. I'll insert an eye here, and then there will be an empress. I will stand on my head to wash my hair.
It's so good. I've finished reading it. I've never read such a good novel. I am uneducated and can only be represented by the character "6"
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