Two Realms: the Taoist Suppression and Killing from Laoshan is Weird
About This Novel
The new book has been released: "Two Realms: Taking Off the Mecha Body to Explode the Stars" Please support Su Li in traveling to a strange world where the moon is broken, and humans live in the city. Outside the city there are countless strange things and anomalies. We have to face life and death crises all the time. Fortunately, I got Zhiyilu and was able to travel to an equally absurd and bizarre world. Here there are old Taoist priests cutting paper into the moon, and there are also living people testing the city god. There are fox monsters here to confuse people's hearts, and there are also methods of climbing bows and crossbows and fighting fiercely. After studying under Laoshan, Su Li relied on the method of cultivating immortals. The city was closed to the gods, the underworld was opened, the heaven was created, and the moon was repaired. Forgive and make Weird a god! ... Many years later, Su Li looked back and realized that he was the only weird person in the world.
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Official(23)Scraped 20d ago
Where do your people come from?
The mortality rate is half at every turn, and the mortality rate is half when you leave the city. Author, where do the people in your works come from? Regular refresh? Are the people inside all NPCs? I'm not afraid.
The protagonist is too loser
The author actually writes about the protagonist's obsessive thoughts about women. Where did the first time traveler come from so many erotic stories? Secondly, when you studied inner alchemy in Taoism, you basically had a clear mind and few desires, and you were tempted by women at every turn. Do you want to do it? What path do you practice?
Overall it looks extremely stiff
The fighting scenes are not written with that kind of passionate feeling, and the overall look is extremely stiff. The distance that is supposed to be face-to-face is described as sprinting and running wildly. Moreover, the protagonist is not a person with extraordinary talents. It is impossible to get started immediately after just learning and practicing a few times. If it is a profit, It's understandable that he used extra points and skipped the practice process, but he got started immediately and was extremely proficient. If his talent is very good, shouldn't it be because he had killed several monsters before getting Zhiyilu and had skilled combat experience? In short, I personally think it is extremely unreasonable.
After reading Chapter 22, I felt that it was written in a perfunctory manner. In the main world, the protagonist is in a world of ghosts. He was assassinated by his colleagues just after leaving the city with a treasure. Let's not talk about the thoughts of those powerful people. The protagonist has such a rotten tomato brain. How did you grow up? Others want to kill you, but you still have enemies. It's the same in the Laoshan world. When faced with the official who wants to kill you, you don't take action against the monk who wants to kill you. After all, he didn't succeed in killing you. It looks really aggrieved. I strongly recommend not to fall into the trap.
Holy Mother. It's the kind of story where one of the three people must die, and the protagonist is willing to sacrifice himself. The other two were still strangers. Quite a good person. Good people in the apocalypse
It was okay at the beginning. The setting later on when you want to save a whole city is a true Virgin.
The protagonist of the Madonna should be killed or not. The plot is blunt and not many people can watch it. No wonder the exemption is limited to 1 day. Even if the exemption is limited, I am halfway through and don't want to continue watching.
I've read almost 70 chapters. The writing is okay but the main character, the Holy Mother, can't stand it anymore.
I would like to express my sincere apologies to all readers. The quality drops in the third update, so I should prepare for the second update for a while and try my best to pursue quality. Mainly, I consulted a certain boss, who pointed out the problems and directions for me. Now I am ready to reconstruct the plot and direction of the third volume. I would also like to thank the boss here, although I feel that most bosses will not be able to read this paragraph. I am not familiar with the boss at all, so I was just shameless, opened the private chat, and sent the boss a long and disgusting message. Unexpectedly, the boss was willing to talk to me during the meeting and let me leave a message.
Good
The first part was good, but after seeing 47, I felt like I couldn't continue watching it. Two points, first, after reading the follow-up catalog, I plan to build the City God's Temple, and to counteract the difference between the two worlds. This is a strange world, and the difference between ghosts and strangeness may be a dimensionality reduction attack. There is no point in building it if you don't reduce the dimensionality. Second, a guy at the bottom has completely cured Yue Gui. Do you want to go to heaven or be taken to heaven? For example, this is a strange era when no one trusts each other, and this is an era when individuals are consumables. If you meet someone who doesn't sell the protagonist to a weird demon suppressor, it doesn't mean that they are all good people. One more thing, it's a bit like a virgin. A time traveler is not from the same world, but his feelings are so deep.
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Community(0)
Official(23)Scraped 20d ago
Where do your people come from?
The mortality rate is half at every turn, and the mortality rate is half when you leave the city. Author, where do the people in your works come from? Regular refresh? Are the people inside all NPCs? I'm not afraid.
The protagonist is too loser
The author actually writes about the protagonist's obsessive thoughts about women. Where did the first time traveler come from so many erotic stories? Secondly, when you studied inner alchemy in Taoism, you basically had a clear mind and few desires, and you were tempted by women at every turn. Do you want to do it? What path do you practice?
Overall it looks extremely stiff
The fighting scenes are not written with that kind of passionate feeling, and the overall look is extremely stiff. The distance that is supposed to be face-to-face is described as sprinting and running wildly. Moreover, the protagonist is not a person with extraordinary talents. It is impossible to get started immediately after just learning and practicing a few times. If it is a profit, It's understandable that he used extra points and skipped the practice process, but he got started immediately and was extremely proficient. If his talent is very good, shouldn't it be because he had killed several monsters before getting Zhiyilu and had skilled combat experience? In short, I personally think it is extremely unreasonable.
After reading Chapter 22, I felt that it was written in a perfunctory manner. In the main world, the protagonist is in a world of ghosts. He was assassinated by his colleagues just after leaving the city with a treasure. Let's not talk about the thoughts of those powerful people. The protagonist has such a rotten tomato brain. How did you grow up? Others want to kill you, but you still have enemies. It's the same in the Laoshan world. When faced with the official who wants to kill you, you don't take action against the monk who wants to kill you. After all, he didn't succeed in killing you. It looks really aggrieved. I strongly recommend not to fall into the trap.
Holy Mother. It's the kind of story where one of the three people must die, and the protagonist is willing to sacrifice himself. The other two were still strangers. Quite a good person. Good people in the apocalypse
It was okay at the beginning. The setting later on when you want to save a whole city is a true Virgin.
The protagonist of the Madonna should be killed or not. The plot is blunt and not many people can watch it. No wonder the exemption is limited to 1 day. Even if the exemption is limited, I am halfway through and don't want to continue watching.
I've read almost 70 chapters. The writing is okay but the main character, the Holy Mother, can't stand it anymore.
I would like to express my sincere apologies to all readers. The quality drops in the third update, so I should prepare for the second update for a while and try my best to pursue quality. Mainly, I consulted a certain boss, who pointed out the problems and directions for me. Now I am ready to reconstruct the plot and direction of the third volume. I would also like to thank the boss here, although I feel that most bosses will not be able to read this paragraph. I am not familiar with the boss at all, so I was just shameless, opened the private chat, and sent the boss a long and disgusting message. Unexpectedly, the boss was willing to talk to me during the meeting and let me leave a message.
Good
The first part was good, but after seeing 47, I felt like I couldn't continue watching it. Two points, first, after reading the follow-up catalog, I plan to build the City God's Temple, and to counteract the difference between the two worlds. This is a strange world, and the difference between ghosts and strangeness may be a dimensionality reduction attack. There is no point in building it if you don't reduce the dimensionality. Second, a guy at the bottom has completely cured Yue Gui. Do you want to go to heaven or be taken to heaven? For example, this is a strange era when no one trusts each other, and this is an era when individuals are consumables. If you meet someone who doesn't sell the protagonist to a weird demon suppressor, it doesn't mean that they are all good people. One more thing, it's a bit like a virgin. A time traveler is not from the same world, but his feelings are so deep.
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