I Became a Monster

If you accidentally posted it, Susan. Otherwise, I will ask my pigeon to send you a lawyer's letter. I am IKUN. I am not going to lie to you. 😘

I started my career by writing pretentious and slap-in-the-face articles, but I have a dream of being a fairy in my heart. This book is a new attempt, and I may be scolded or rejected. I've always been a eunuch, and I'm going to stick to it this time. Even if I fail, I will grit my teeth and finish writing the story, presenting a complete human world. In order to avoid being scolded and losing my mind, I plan to set up a comment area. (Only those who have subscribed or rewarded can comment~screen out negative fans.)

I'm already under a lot of pressure, and there are still people who are being irritating, so I'll raise the bar for comments a little higher. Please be considerate, thank you. In fact, I find that most supporters don't like to comment, which is fine.

Commenting is the right of book friends, and I cannot stop you from speaking out of fear of being scolded. Although the scolding today was unpleasant, I deserved it. Because no one will target you for no reason. If the plot is not well written and makes you unhappy, please don't take it to heart. Being happy is the most important thing.

A bad review can easily make me depressed, doubt myself, and very painful. But now it's on the shelves. Everyone has spent money. It's your right to leave negative reviews. I won't delete it. At most, I'll pretend I didn't see it. The author's level is limited, and the work will definitely have some shortcomings. But getting together is fate, I hope we respect each other, thank you.

The first few chapters are well written, but what the heck in the back, they are so weak that they live broadcast to cause trouble in the underworld. If they can't defeat them, they run away to land and let their old friends suffer in hell. The reason is that they don't tell who the protagonist is. What a fool x. If a mortal comes to the underworld, there are many ways to get you to talk. Making a big fuss in the underworld, and being behind the scenes, the underworld wants to arrest people, it's just a matter of minutes I still write this embarrassing pretentious article to this day. A human Overhaul defeated a group of monsters, and then a monster shouted that my monsters will be... Today. Then the protagonist goes out and pretends to be slapped in the face

Personally, I think it's very good to watch. I've rewatched it 4 or 5 times and the characters and plot are very good.

I just don't understand, she's another virgin bitch, it's normal for me to kill demons, but it's not normal for demons to kill others, so there's this kind of nonsense

Note: I am a rough person, speaking from experience of reading novels for many years, and it is difficult to reconcile. The early stage is good, it is tear-jerking and difficult to calm down. The immortal's helplessness and sadness at the separation of relatives and friends are very good in the early character portrayal. But starting from the middle period, there was not much characterization of anything around it, and it was just thrown away as a chess piece after it was used up. It was difficult to generate emotional resonance. One was that the characters were not well drawn, and the other was that the manager's writing was sparse, and it was a bit like skipping it directly. In the middle period, from the late stage of cultivating immortals to the end of the era of eradication of law, this paragraph is really poorly written. Brother, when you look back, there are no emotional scenes at all. I didn't expect that the few strokes you wrote for a person who had a big influence in the later period have impressed me. In the later world in the painting, this kind of routine is too cliche, and the antagonist scenes and emotional scenes are not written. The parts that can make people passionate, sad, and touching are not written. There is no way to empathize with the novel at all. The later development is too buggy and too economical. When it comes to things like the world in paintings, try not to use this method, because many people who read books have seen this kind of ending or excessiveness, and this kind of excessiveness will give people a feeling of my past. The previous investment was wrong and false. When people read novels, they concentrate on it. If they don't delete it and forget about it, that's not reading a book, that's flipping a book. Subjectively speaking, it would be better if you didn't sew so much. It would be better if you lengthen the text from the beginning to the world in the painting and write more vivid characters. The ending should not be like the world in the painting is the real world. Then you travel in the chaos and encounter the earth, and you can't let go of your parents' graves for a long time. Although the clichés will touch the heart if they are written with enough detail, because we do not jump out of the cracks in the rocks anyway. Parents are our greatest concern and support. If you bring it in well enough, many people can break their defenses. Another thing to talk about is cultivation. A hundred times is fine, but if you jump too fast, it's a cool article. If the number is too high, adults will take a look at it. Oh, and it's like stacking experience. No one cares about the growth of the protagonist anymore. Finally, I end in the world in the painting. May he be true and the dead live forever. Goodbye👋 After going back and forth in these several worlds, I can see that you want to write a lot of things, but every great master starts from a little bit. He bites off more than he can chew. You still have to say it lightly, master the rhythm of the story, and be clear about where the tear-jerking point is and where the top point is in the whole book. I wish your writing gets better and better. I hope that in the future, a novel that will make my eyes shine will come from your hand. When I read the whole book, I couldn't let it go for a long time. I opened the details page and took a look. Hey, isn't this the author of the article I posted before? Come on! I hope your wonderful writing will be fruitful in the future.

I first came across the short play on Music Notes, but unfortunately it was too short, so I dug out the book on QQ Reading. Then I read it, and the writing style in the book is also very good (I'm not trying to praise supplements or scold me) "Everyone has their own life. In their short life, they are their own unique selves and not someone else's substitute." "Death is not the end, forgetfulness is. And my old friend will always live in my heart." What you think may not be right, but neither may what others think. Everyone has their own position and thoughts. In many aspects, the content of the author's book is not like that of a male channel where the protagonist has to pretend to be a bitch and then laugh at him or feel that the other person is too small to do something about it. It is also not like a female channel where the protagonist has the love of his life next to him and then abuses his body and mind or believes that the other person will be together for a lifetime. Instead, the people around him are his best friends, apprentices, and family members. He doesn't dominate a party because he is strong, but helps someone when he encounters someone doing evil. Nor does he stay with a girl or have a harem just because he likes him. He treats them as family and friends. Finally (补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我补药骂我)(觉得我有问题提出可以但补药骂我补药骂我)